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My Charater (lets try this again)

Post by Seth on Mon May 25, 2009 9:16 am

Name: Kishin Muzuki

Age: 14

Gender: male

Village: Konoha

Appearance: His short hair hair makes him look like a girl, but this genius is to evil to be one(joking). His tanned skintone and black eyes can just make him look pure evil. And the but the outfit is kool. Wearing a huge black coat with hood a scaf and sunglasses it's hard to see his face the only disgusting fact you can get about his face are thoses black eyes.

Personality: Dark, quiet and evil. Always plotting always evil. He is a pure genius on the inside that combination makes deadly, never afraid to kill and always kills in the most affective way. Apart from killing Kishin doesn't know much else. Kishin, apart from being evil is very quiet and unknown or seen, which is a good quality. Kishin hates loud people that can't shut up. The fact that he isn't loud and noisy is weird, because Kishin when ever in battle usaully ends up doing a overkill whenever he can, he is very destructive and chaotic. Apart from thoses two trates Kishin is allown, not because others dislike him but more because he choices isolation.

element: Fire and earth

Rank: Chuuin Anbu

Skill Ninjustu 10 , Weaponry 20, kuchiyose no jutsu 10 and Genjustu 0

Clan: The Muzuki clan

http://trueshinobilegends.forumotion.net/approved-clans-and-bloodlines-f44/muzuki-clan-t794.htm#6634

Clan History: This clan has not much history. Kishin was born allown with the name he knows nothing of his clan aprat from what he has read in some old scrolls. What he fund most intresting was there Kekkei Genkai but he wasn't sure what the scrolls ment yet. It was said that the Muzuki clan was extremly old and was around at the times of the great ninja war. Using their superia detection skills and ninjustu, killed enemy ninja easy.

Also he fund in the old houses of the Muzuki clan where bits of history. Thoses scrolls said that the Muzuki clan where a powerful Sephrim clan that where feared by all, ever over clan hated them for their power. The Misumi clan didn't trust any other clan, and that was their down fall. A load of other clans came together and attacked the Muzuki clans' home, it was like a mini war. Mini because the Misumis' where out numbered 100 to 1. It didn't last long. More than half the clan was dead

The rest where all murdered by a second suprice assualt on there home inside the leaf village. It wasn't the fact that they where weak, but it was because their where so little in numbers. They where out numbered, again.

History: Kishin has lived to fight and fought to live. If he wasn't fighting in the playground or around the village he would be training both his mind and body. Living allown and issolated. But there is a difference between him and the overs that where left allown. He loves life and want to die on the battle field. Being a warrior is his dream. Kishin is living his dream.

But before Genin he was at the acdemy. Kishin would always get into fights with students and teachers and always come out as the undefied winner. all the teachers thought the same. He was a weirdo and wouldn't become a ninja ever. They where half wrong.

When Kishin was a Genin he studied and worked under the great Suzume Mokero. He learned far faster than his peers and was undoutbable a genuis. Kishin learned what it meant to be a ninja and is the ninja he is because of his training as a genin.

Kishin took the chunin exam and passed it first time, easily. He stood out from the rest of the ninja taking the exam. He stood out some much he was asked to become a anbu member. With his brillance in stragety he got through without breaking a sweet.

Nindo: Honour, regardless of price

Likes: Chaos, Justu and Ice Cream

Dislikes: Dieing, peace and Too many rules

rp sample:

Kishin walks onto the desolant field in it's pittiful winter setting. Kishin walked straight into the middle and collapsed on the ground, completely covered in blood. But his face still showed the loving and warm smile of a child, but the other faces around him showed more or a dead face. "Ha...hahahaahaha!, Gimmie more!".It then started to snow, which would soon cover the blood stained snow and the bodies. Then nobody would ever see the evidence, of tragedy that happened there today.

But sadly there was still one over person remaining. A bandit how has come to steal the weapons of the ninja that have fallen here today. Kishin didn't like the fact that the dead where being disrespect like that. Kishin started to do some hand sighns and shouted Earth Spike Justu, a huge spike raised from the earth and went straight through the bandits chest. The bandit died in a secound, not only because of the spike but also the shock of it coming out of nowhere.

Kishin had completed his mission and was now going to return back to Konah, happy-ish.

Jutsus:

Name:Fire Blast Justu
Rank:B
Element:Fire
Skill:Ninjustu
Range:far(10+m)
Description:Shots a huge fire blast at my opponent. If it succesfully hits my enemy will really feel the heat and start to burn. This Justu is a powerful phyical force in the strike as well.

Name: Earth Spike Justu
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Skill:Ninjustu
Range: far(10+m)
Description:A giant spike comes up under my oopnoent and slashes them or pierces. Because the spike was sharpened by Kishins Charkra it is extremly sharp.

Name:Mud wall Justu
Rank:C
Element:Earth
Skill:Ninjustu
Description: Kishin spits out a load of mud from his mouth and a giant wall of earth comes from the ground to protect Kishin. This wall is made from earth and mud and is huge. This wall isn't perfect tho it can be bought down.
Range:far(5+m)

name:Summoning Justu (Beetle) kuchiyose no jutsu
rank: Adolescent level
species:Beetle
looks:A giant blue beetle around 5 metres tall. It has a hard shell and large wing span that allows it to fly around easily. It's horn has three spikes for raming too.
origin:I found it flying around the forest and made a deal with it. But this huge beetle being under a drunken influence crashed into a tree. Thats when Kishin stepped in and helped it out. Kishin carried the beetle on his back all the way home. It was then when the beetle and Kishin got more drunk throw a party and made a deal. The beetle will give Kishin a helping hand where ever.
type:transportation
jutsu:

Name:Wind Blade Justu
Rank:C
Element:Wind
Skill:Ninjustu
Description:The beetle builds up a load of wind type charkra inside it's stomach and blast my enemies with it, the intense pressure can blow away enemies. This justu is like being hit by a mini storm.
Range:far(+10+m)

Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
element:n/a
skill:ninja
Rank:E
description:Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Jutsu Name:Name: Transformation Technique (変化の術, Henge no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Rope Escape Technique (縄抜けの術, Nawanuke no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Body Replacement Technique (変わり身の術, Kawarimi no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Secound skills:

The clan that Kishin never grow up with, where extremly good with their swords. Kishin found the hidden scrolls under his clans compound and have read and analysed them fully. He has been praticsing erveryday of his life with swords. But because he has found his clans special swords and can combine his fire justu with his sword work.

(Sorry about the double post)


Last edited by Seth on Sat May 30, 2009 9:20 am; edited 7 times in total

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Re: My Charater (lets try this again)

Post by .:Arashi:. on Mon May 25, 2009 1:44 pm

Longer and better RP sample if you want to be an Chuunin ANBU.

But because he has found his clans special swords and can combine his fire justu with his sword work.

Make the swords you speak of in weapon creation so they can be approved. What do you mean you combine your swordsmanship with your fire jutsu?

This clan has no history. Kishin was born allown with the name he knows nothing of his clan aprat from what he has read in some old scrolls. What he fund most intresting was there Kekkei Genkai but he wasn't sure what the scrolls ment yet.(yea can I add that later)

No you have to make this longer the clan must have a history like how was it made, who made it, how did the clan come across their Kekkei genkai, where did the clan come from. All these things are apart of the history, a clan without a history is really not possible.

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Re: My Charater (lets try this again)

Post by Seisoku Kedamono on Mon May 25, 2009 5:13 pm

Put more or a personality...

If he is a part of a clan YOU MUST put a better clan history.

Speaking of clan did you create it? You have to create the clan and get it approved in the clan creation area ^_^'

Put more likes/dislikes

Put the academy jutsus. All characters are supposed to have them.

Make sure you put kuchiyose no jutsu if you want to actually summon the beetle.

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Re: My Charater (lets try this again)

Post by Seth on Sat May 30, 2009 8:29 am

Ok I think I've got all the academy justu now, and I've added my clans link and also added personality:)(edited)

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Re: My Charater (lets try this again)

Post by Dr.Strange on Sun May 31, 2009 10:50 am

APPROVED.

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