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Post by The Hazy Waves on Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:00 pm

Name: Aina

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Village: Mist/Leaf Village

Appearance: Wavy light blue hair with electric yellow stripes. Tied into two ponytails with indigo hair ties. Eyes are usually a calm icy blue, but when mad or upset, they darken into a stormy ocean gray. Deep indigo shirt with a high collar. Sleeves come out and cover the top of shoulders. Right side of Neckline comes down to the waist, showing a white shirt underneath. White shorts that come down to her knees. Dark blue boots with white tips.

Personality: When she first meets someone, she's shy and quiet, unless she's with friends. Then she's a little more outgoing. After she gets to know a person, she's more talkative and cheerful. She's very stubborn and doesn't back down in a fight. She's also guarded with her thoughts and feelings.

Element: Water & Electric

Rank: Chuunin

Skill: kenjutsu, Ninjutsu

Clan: none

Clan History: N/A

History: She's Daniwa's older twin sister. As children, she bullied Daniwa, so now Daniwa hates her. She was also treated better than Daniwa. When their parents left to tend business in the Rain Country, they took her with them to continue training as a shinobi in their academy. They staid at an apartment in the Hidden Mist Village where she trained to be a ninja. One day, she came home from training to find both of her parents dead. After that, she traveled back to the Hidden Leaf Village. As she was traveling, she found an injured young wolf, about half a year old, which took a liking to her and now follows her everywhere. She named him Itzal, which means shadow, because of his dark black coat. He is currently only her traveling companion.

Nindo: To live my life how I want to live it.

Likes: Swimming, Itzal, books, the cold

Dislikes: high temperatures

rp sample:

Aina sighed as she walked down the street. She was tired and her body ached all over from training. She shifted the bags of food to her other hand so she could open the door to the apartment her and her parent's were staying in. "I'm home," she called out as she started taking off her shoes, stopping a couple moments later. It was too quiet in the house. She knew her parents weren't out, their shoes were still here, and they wouldn't be sleeping, it was only a little after noon. She tossed the bag to the floor and ran to the living room. She froze and almost gagged at what she saw.

Her parents were still in the house, just not in the land of the living. Aina sank to her knees as she looked around the room. There were kunai embedded in the wall, along with shuriken, there had definitely been a fight. Her father lay by the window, a large gash in his stomach, blood soaking his clothes and the floor. Her mother lay on the opposite side of the room, neck skit, burn marks on her arms. Both of their eyes were staring at her, glazed and unseeing. Blood was splattered everywhere.

Aina struggled to her feet and ran out the door, barely registering that shoes were still on. She ran as fast as she sould toward the forest, tears threatening to fall. She dodged past by standers, ignoring the looks they were throwing her. She had to get away. She collapsed once she entered the forest and let the tears fall. She wasn't sure how long she sat there, but the tears finally stopped. "I have nowhere to go," she said to herself. She sat there for a little while longer before her head shot up. "No, I do. Daniwa's in the Hidden Leaf Village. I'll go there." She pushed herself off the ground and set off toward the Hidden Leaf Village and her twin, putting the Hidden Mist village and her parents behind her, not once looking back.

Jutsus:

Name:Bubble Rising A
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: short and mid
Description: She holds her hands together by the fingertips and from the space provided by her index fingers and thumbs emerges bubbles. It takes longer to create bigger ones, but they prove more effective during Jutsus. Until they are put to use, they hover above her. A Bubbles form in one post which are the weakest offense and defense easily destroyed with a Rank D Ninjutsu. They are capable of performing the followiing: Bubble Wrap and Bubble Thrust A.

Name:Bubble Rising B
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: short and mid
Description: She holds her hands together by the fingertips and from the space provided by her index fingers and thumbs emerges bubbles. It takes longer to create bigger ones, but they prove more effective during Jutsus. Until they are put to use, they hover above her. B Bubbles form in two posts which offer average damage and a defense that requires two Rank C Ninjustu to be destroyed. They are capable of performing Bubble Wrap and Bubble Thrust B.

Name:Bubble Rising C
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: short and mid
Description: She holds her hands together by the fingertips and from the space provided by her index fingers and thumbs emerges bubbles. It takes longer to create bigger ones, but they prove more effective during Jutsus. Until they are put to use, they hover above her. C Bubbles form in three posts which are very strong and well in defense making 4 Rank C Ninjutsu its limit. They are capable of performing Bubble Wrap and Bubble Thrust C.

Name: Bubble Wrap
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Range: short
Description: The bubbles form a barrier around her able to absorb attacks up to B rank and pop in place of her. It can take up to five attacks and cancels the affects of genjutsu as long as she keeps a bubble over her head like an air tank keeping her immune to genjutsu.

Name: Bubble Thrust A
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: All
Description: The bubbles come in a great rush at the target, bursting on impact. A Bubbles cause minimal damage, but travel fastest.

Name: Bubble Thrust B
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: All
Description: The bubbles come in a great rush at the target, bursting on impact. B Bubbles cause moderate damage and travel as fast as kunai.

Name: Bubble Thrust C
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: All
Description: The bubbles come in a great rush at the target, bursting on impact. C Bubbles cause massive damage and blur vision for 3 posts, but travel slowest.

Name: Wet Glands
Rank: D
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: none
Description: She opens her wet glands and moisturizes her body adding flexibility, increased resistance to fire, increased vulnerability to lightning, boosts water element moves by half, and enhances agility. It proves most effective when she uses it repeatedly. The max amount of times she can use this is five.

Name: Spark Palm
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Short
Description: She rests her palm on the victim and can send at least 150 volts and up to 300 volts through his/her nervous system, causing a 1 post stunning from incapability of proper movement. (Minor and temporary paralysis)

Name: Static Steps
Rank: B
Skill: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Range: All
Description: Static forms at the nerves in her feet, increasing speed drastically so that her movements appear in blurs and contact with her feet are enhanced kicks. Lasts 5 posts (from me).


Name: Light Eyes
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: none
Description: Small amounts of electricity pool in her eyes, allowing her to see in the dark. The electricity also enhances her vision. When in use, her irises turn pale yellow and give off a faint glow.

Name: Lightning Rod
Rank: C
Skill: Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: none
Description: Electricity in the air is drawn to her sword, causing it to become electrically charged and currents of electricity to run along the blade.

Name: Water Clone
element:n/a
skill:ninja
Rank:C
description:Water Clone Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy (In the Mist). The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja with water. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the clone gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Jutsu Name:Name: Transformation Technique (変化の術, Henge no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Rope Escape Technique (縄抜けの術, Nawanuke no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Body Replacement Technique (変わり身の術, Kawarimi no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Cloak of Invisibility Technique (隠れ蓑の術, Kakuremino no Jutsu)
element:N/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
description:This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible.

Jibaku Fuda: Kassei, 自爆札・活, literally "Exploding Tag: Activate")
element:N/a
skill:Ninja
rank:E
Description:Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag


Last edited by The Hazy Waves on Thu Feb 12, 2009 10:20 am; edited 3 times in total
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Re: Aina's Application

Post by Paksennarion on Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:51 pm

Woo! I get to look at THW-san's app! ^_____^

There are a few things that jump out at me firstly:

She doesn't have a rank, it should be Chuunin. Also, she has both Suiton and Raiton jutsu while only having Suiton as an element. Thirdly, is the wolf just a normal wolf? Or a nin-wolf?

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name:Bubble Rising
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: short and mid
Description: She holds her hands together by the fingertips and from the space provided by her index fingers and thumbs emerges bubbles. It takes longer to create bigger ones, but they prove more effective during Jutsus. Until they are put to use, they hover above her. A Bubbles form in one post, B Bubbles form in two posts, and C Bubbles form in three posts.

The last sentence is sort of... confusing. Are you saying that the bubbles have different ranks?

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name: Bubble Wrap
Rank: B
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Range: short
Description: The bubbles form a barrier around her able to absorb attacks up to B rank and pop in place of her. It can take up to five attacks and cancels the affect of genjutsu.

How does it cancel the effects of Genjutsu?

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name: Bubble Thrust
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: All
Description: The bubbles come in a great rush at the target, bursting on impact. A Bubbles cause minimal damage, but travel fastest. B Bubbles cause moderate damage and travel as fast as kunai. C Bubbles cause massive damage and blur vision for 3 posts, but travel slowest.

Hms... Wait, so they're not ranked bubbles. Are they just different types? Sorry... Sometimes I'm slow. T.T

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name: Wet Glands
Rank: E
Skill: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: none
Description: She opens her wet glands and moisturizes her body adding flexibility, increased resistance to fire, increased vulnerability to lightning, boosts water element moves by half, and enhances agility.

Keep in mind that as an E rank it only increases accordingly.

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name: Spark Palm
Rank: D
Skill: Taijutsu and Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: Short
Description: She rests her palm on the victim and can send at least 150 volts and up to 300 volts through his/her nervous system, causing a 1 post stunning from incapability of proper movement. (Minor and temporary paralysis)

I'd think this would be a C rank.

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name: Thunder Clap
Rank: C
Skill: Taijutsu
Element: Lightning
Range: all
Description: Chakra is concentrated in her hands. Her palms are slammed together and from the impact comes a sonic boom that sends off brain waves. This causes chakra flow to be distributing unnecessary quantities of chakra to be used per jutsu on those affected.

How long does this last?

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name: Icy Touch
Rank: C
Skill: Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
Element: Water
Range: Short
Description: The wet glands in her hand open and water coats her hand. When she comes in contact with the victim, the water infuses with chakra,freezing to become super strong ice, impairing movement.

Ice is formed through Suiton and Fuiton, so this jutsu isn't possible for your character. (Assuming her second elemen is Raiton due to the electric jutsu?)

The Hazy Waves wrote:Name: Freezing Blade
Rank: C
Skill: Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: none
Description: The wet glands in her hand open and water pools in her hand. She infuses it with chakra as she runs her hand along the blade of her sword or kunai, freezing it. When the blade comes into contact with something else, it becomes frozen temporarily. Prolonged contact with flesh will cause frostbite and/or loss of limb.

This is the same as the previous one.

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Re: Aina's Application

Post by The Hazy Waves on Mon Feb 09, 2009 10:22 am

Okay, I fixed it and added the basic jutsus.
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Re: Aina's Application

Post by .:Arashi:. on Tue Feb 10, 2009 4:34 pm

~ for the wet glands jutsu you will have to increase the rank for it since only the basic academy jutsu are known as E-rank jutsus only.

~ for the Thunder Clap jutsu the jutsu is more of a medical ninjutsu so I'm going to say no on this one since you dont have medical ninjutsu as a skill.

~ Can you please make the different levels of bubble rising into seperate jutsu.

~ The same for the bubble thrust jutsu can you make the the other levels as seperate jutsu

~ How long do the effects of static steps last?

~ the water clone jutsu is a C-rank jutsu

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Re: Aina's Application

Post by The Hazy Waves on Wed Feb 11, 2009 10:36 am

Okay, I fixed it again.
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Post by YonYon on Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:42 am

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