True Shinobi Legends
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.
Search
 
 

Display results as :
 


Rechercher Advanced Search

Latest topics
» Genin Post Here!
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptyWed Jan 04, 2012 11:10 am by wolfspirit

» SITE MOVE
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptySun Jan 23, 2011 3:52 am by shinobiwan

» Rokory clan
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptyFri Sep 10, 2010 6:45 am by Shinryu Jin

» which side would you rather be on anbu or akatsuki
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptySat Sep 04, 2010 11:21 am by goten 33

» sub-zero atack shatterng death
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptySat Sep 04, 2010 10:54 am by goten 33

» the ravens
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptySat Sep 04, 2010 10:33 am by goten 33

» genjutsu trap attack
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptySat Sep 04, 2010 10:15 am by goten 33

» taijutsu atack art of open palm
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptySat Sep 04, 2010 10:01 am by goten 33

» goten Rokory
Naito Sousha Kumori EmptySat Sep 04, 2010 9:16 am by goten 33

Navigation
 Portal
 Index
 Memberlist
 Profile
 FAQ
 Search
Affiliates
free forum
 

Naito Sousha Kumori

3 posters

Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by Cail Wed May 06, 2009 7:45 pm

Character Information

Name: Naito Sousha Kumori

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Appearance: Avatar, Carries a a pair of kusari-gama connected by chain.

Personality: Naito is mosty an introvert, keeping to himself. He rarely speaks, opting more to just give the occasional 'Hn'. He can often be seen staring off into space, daydreaming as some call it. He seems to focus solely on the mission when he is on one, not going off course to save a civilian that is being harassed by thugs, saying, "There is no hero's among ninja's." In battle, he is ruthless, using any underhanded tricks he can to win. Some would say is what ninja's are suppose to be, unlike most ninja's who now believe in honor.

Most don't know it, but he opens up around children, becoming nicer, and even gaining some humor. He laughs and smiles, and does things most would never dream of him doing. This is due to his own childhood, where he rarely was happy at all, and he believes no children should be unhappy at this time in their lives.

Likes: Like moonlit nigths, and hanging out by tombstones. He loves his freinds.


Dislikes: He hates nothing.

History: Naito was born and raised in his current residence, Iwa. He grew up in a family of mostly non-ninja, meaning he he didn't get a lot of training. His family, the Sousha Kumori's were known throughout Iwa due to their new Kekkei genkai, which is becoming more common in the family. They control the darkness, which some say is making it's way into their hearts.

When Naito was of age, he was entered into Iwa's academy. He got good grades, but never seemed to socialize with the other children, opting to sit by himself near the back. Kid's started seeing him as weird, and never approached him. This greatly decreased his social interaction, making Naito not really care much for other people. Even among his own family he didn't get much interaction, mainly because they too had the same thing happen to them as children.

When he graduated the academy, he had to do what all genin in Iwa had to do at the time. Fight one of his classmate's to the death, sort of of like Kumo's graduation exams, but with their bare hands. Naito had no problem doing this. He felt no regrets at killing his classmate. He didn't enjoy it , but he didn't hate it, either.

He was put on a genin team with a sensei named Garu, Naju, and two other male genin by the name's of Huru, Hitsu and Gaaju, Namida. These people meant nothing to him, really. He had rarely ever spoke to Hitsu and Namida in the academy, and Hitsu hated his guts, though that was understandable, as the one Naito killed was his brother.

The first mission Naito and his team went on was actually a C-Rank, because Namida and Hitsu were both from well-known clans. It was to hunt down a small band of bandits. Their sensei was not able to accompany them. Once they made it to the place where the bandits were supposed to be camped, they were surprised. There was too many bandits for the three genin. Hitsu, thinking he could take on the bandits due to his lineage, jumped down to attack. As Namida tried to help, Naito held him back. They retreated with the sounds of battle at their backs. They never saw Hitsu again.

They decided they would go to the chuunin exams, which at the time were being held in Konoha. They got a new teammate by the name of Raigo. As soon as they got to Konoha, they knew they were not welcome. All the civilians looked down on them, whispering that scum like them should not be allowed in Konoha's exam. In Iwa, it would be the same for Konoha ninja, since their coddling of their genin disgusted most Iwa ninja. They had arrived late, and the chuunin exam would be commencing in about an hour, so they high-tailed it there.

Once they reached the room they had the first exam in, they had 5 minutes left. Naito took notice that they were the only Iwa team there. The first exam was a test, apparently. But the examiner talked too much, emphazizing cheating a little too much. He realized the point of the exam, and so did his teammates. Naito used his kekkei genkai to follow the movements of a persons pencil's. His teammates cheated their own way.

After the exam, there was to be a final question. It would decide his life as a shinobi. Namida didn't and almost raised his hand, till a look from Naito stopped him. Raigo didn't even think of raising his hand. They passed the first portion of the exam.

The second portion of the exam was a survival test. They had to wander a forest for five days, and get a scroll in the process. They received a earth scroll, which was kinda funny. They went to their gate, and when the exam started, they were off like shots. They first encountered a team from leaf. They quickly killed off these pest, though they all recieved injury, and were lucky to get a heaven scroll. They made it to the tower with little resistance, being able to hide from other groups.

The third part of the exams is what Naito hated. He first had to fight Raigo. If he won, and Namida won, they would have to fight each other in the second round. Kaibutsu sighed. They had purposely put the Iwa genin against each other. His fight with Raigo was first, so he jumped down into the arena.

Raigo was beaten by Kaibutsu, who had much more experience. Namida also won his match, meaning he would have to fight him as well. He watched the rest of the fights go by as if it was a blur, and in no time, he had to fight Namida. He once again jumped down into the arena.

He beat Namida, but lost his round to a kid who just wouldn't give the hell up. He had neon yellow hair and yelled how he was gonna be the Yondaime. The kid had too much speed, and too much stamina, and just kept getting back up. He was surprised when he got back to Iwa and recieved a chuunin vest.

Ninja ID

Village: Iwa

Rank: Chuunin

element: water,lightning

Nindo: No matter what i will win!

Skills: kenjutsu, Ninjutsu , Taijutsu, Genjutsu

Skills Points:
Ninjutsu: 30
Genjutsu: 10
Fuuinjutsu: 15
Taijutsu: 15

Equipment:

Kunia 6x

Pack of gum 2x

Summoning scrolls 4x

Smoke bombs 3x

Ligth Granades 2x

Misc. Information

RP sample: Kenzi got out of bed as he stood in his room he let out a most unhappy groan. Being a ninja wasn't easy it seemed easy to him before he started but now it's getting alot tougher. "So, I'v gotten up should I bunk off again or actulley go!" He thought to himself as he got dressed and left his house the day flew by and was quite exciting.


Kenzi threw a shurikan at a target going for a better aim than he did last time he got it in the target but nearly off. "Darn!" He moaned loudly as others watched laughing like every other day. "One day everyone will regret mocking me I will be hokage someday!" whispered Kenzi angrily. When he finished practicing he decided to walk home he began to pack up his stuff and then looked at the sky as rain started to fall.


In the evening Kenzi watched the stars in the sky, the rain finished falling and the stars were brighter than ever it was nice to see the stars like that as villages were destroying little Konoha day by day.
The stars were granting a wish for Kenzi he whispered what he wished it was this "I wish that I'd become strong enough to help konoha and become hokage,". Kenzi yawned loudly he realised he was exhausted from training and walking home today. He went up the stairs looked at the sky in his room and then got changed into his PJs and went to sleep warm and happily in bed.


Raindrops fell on to the ground the noise they made was peaceful and soft it was early morning the sun started to shine and break threw the clouds the sky looked like it was lit like a candle the bright sky and pain comes this way. Kenzi realised he was late for a inportent messege from the hokage so he changed quickly and rushed out on the way to the hokage.

Sorry If there are some bad spelling errors I made this rp a few months ago

How did you find us?: Found it off google

Nicknames: None

I used one of my other charcters Kekkei Genkai


Last edited by Cail on Sat May 09, 2009 10:56 am; edited 5 times in total
Cail
Cail
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue80/80Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (80/80)
Health:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue100/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

Back to top Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Re: Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by Cail Wed May 06, 2009 7:46 pm

Im still working on the rp
Cail
Cail
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue80/80Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (80/80)
Health:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue100/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

Back to top Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Re: Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by .:Arashi:. Thu May 07, 2009 5:48 pm

I just took a brief look at your app and found some mistakes that will need som corrections.

~ Okay first the only village opened at the moment is Iwa so you will have to change what village your character is from.

~Also put your jutsus in the proper template the templates can be found in jutsu creation.

~ In kekkei genkai just put the name of your KG.

~ You will have to follow the summoning template for your summoning the template can be found in jutsu creation.

~ Since your going for chuunin and we were only allowing genin I'll make exception for you if your RP sample is good enough, chuunin or higher level you may be a chuunin. Chuunin get a total of 70 points to distribute in their skills.

~ Just as a reminder you have to get your clan approved in clan registration first before your ninja can be approved.

after you make these corrections I will take a second look at your app again.
.:Arashi:.
.:Arashi:.
Admin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue98/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (98/100)
Health:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue100/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

Back to top Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Re: Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by Cail Thu May 07, 2009 5:49 pm

ok thanks
Cail
Cail
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue80/80Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (80/80)
Health:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue100/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

Back to top Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Re: Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by .:Arashi:. Fri May 08, 2009 6:02 pm

~ Edit your history so it fits your life as an Stone ninja of Iwa.
.:Arashi:.
.:Arashi:.
Admin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue98/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (98/100)
Health:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue100/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

Back to top Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Re: Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by Cail Sat May 09, 2009 10:48 am

ok
Cail
Cail
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue80/80Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (80/80)
Health:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue100/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

Back to top Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Re: Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by Dr.Strange Sat May 09, 2009 11:55 am

looks okay ^^

Its Shika approved Shika Shake
Dr.Strange
Dr.Strange
God of Conquest
God of Conquest


Character sheet
Chakra:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue210/210Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Naito Sousha Kumori Left_bar_bleue100/100Naito Sousha Kumori Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname: The Devil's Knight

Back to top Go down

Naito Sousha Kumori Empty Re: Naito Sousha Kumori

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum