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Post by The Doom Flower Thu Feb 12, 2009 10:48 am

Name: Daniwa

Age: 21.5

Gender: Female

Village: Leaf Village

Appearance: Medium length hair that dangles over her shoulders barely of a purple pink color/raspberry. Her headband is green and is worn on her forehead. She wears a black ANBU mask with floral designs on the top left corner and bottom right corner. Her upper torso consists of a strap like bra of pearl pink, a jacket that stops below her chest of green along with white rims. On her wrists are gauntlets of a raspberry color that deflect ninja tools. At her lower torso is a skin tight pair of under pants that stop at her ankles of a green color. Then she wears a skirt that falls to her right side the same color of her gauntlets. Then she has knee high taped boots matching her skirt and wears her sword sheathed at her waist and Ashu-Ray spinning on her back.

Personality: She's normally mellow unless in an intense battle or diagreement. She tends to gaze at anonymous things and only hears what she wants to when someone speaks to her. Her weaknesses involve multitasking whether it be mentally or physically when it involves caring for another being and when she's called by her alias. It weakens her mentally making her much more vulnerable in combat unless she manages to replace it with anger which she uses to kill her enemy. She can seem selfless in some situations but that's never the case. She's also a real flirt when she tries to get things she wants. In general she' a mellow, quick witted and sexy woman with a lacking of trust signs.

Rank: ANBU Captain of Tactics and Assassination

Element: Fire and Earth

Skill: Ken & Ninjutsu

Clan: -none-

History: Daniwa was born into a wealthy family that thought if they bought her enought things she'd be happy without them and they'd be able to tend to their first born who seemed to be more successful. Daniwa was raised under the watch of her butler who took care of her after they died and he too eventually died protecting her. After that, she developed a strange habit of being the only one surviving out of her squad and every move to a new squad made resulted the same. She hid herself from the community but eventually joined the ANBU to be of some use rather than lock herself away but she fears she may kill off her commrades like she did the other 5 teams in the past. She sees her family pet, Durashi as her only friend now.

Nindo: To serve my duty in Konoha

Likes: Toying with people and being paid attention to

Dislikes: Close relationships and being ignored

Name:Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
element:n/a
skill:ninja
Rank:E
description:Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Jutsu Name:Name: Transformation Technique (変化の術, Henge no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Rope Escape Technique (縄抜けの術, Nawanuke no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Body Replacement Technique (変わり身の術, Kawarimi no Jutsu)
element:n/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
Description:This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Cloak of Invisibility Technique (隠れ蓑の術, Kakuremino no Jutsu)
element:N/a
skill:ninja
rank:E
description:This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible.

Jibaku Fuda: Kassei, 自爆札・活, literally "Exploding Tag: Activate")
element:N/a
skill:Ninja
rank:E
Description:Utilizing chakra, the user is able to activate the explosion mechanism of a distant bomb tag


Last edited by The Doom Flower on Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:41 am; edited 4 times in total
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The Doom Flower
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Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue100/100Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
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Daniwa Empty Re: Daniwa

Post by YonYon Thu Feb 12, 2009 12:39 pm

Hey Hun....There's been a change of plans.

You have to be a Chuunin ANBU. Minato is your Captain. So....SOrry about this...You only get 2 b ranks now
YonYon
YonYon
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue200/200Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)
Nickname: Silent As The Forest

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Post by The Doom Flower Mon Feb 16, 2009 11:24 am

1)Name: Inferno
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: Daniwa fires a single ball of fire from the tip of her finger (she tends to hold her hand out like a gun) no bigger than the size of the ball of a pen. It can trigger the biggest of fires if enough chakra is put into it but she isn't of that level yet. This attack takes little chakra but was a challenge to learn. These fire balls she fires one at a time can only travel in the direction she aims them at and travel at light speed so her aim has to be good.

2)Name: Hot Slice
Element: Fire
Skill: Weaponry
Rank: C
Description: Sow-Byoku heats up to a gaping 100 degrees that gives Daniwa cleaner cuts making chopping easier to do.
Weapon Approved

3)Name:Venomous Kiss
Rank:C
Element:Earth
[u]Skill:Ninjutsu
Range:close(0-5m)
Description:Daniwa locks lips with her opponent/victim and releases a toxin that swells out of her taste buds and stuns during opponents response to my attack as well as knocks out the person for at least a good 3 posts. No, this doesn't happen when she kisses somebody, it is a jutsu disguised in an action.

4)Name: Heat Wave
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: A great wave of heat rushes over the field raising temperatures greatly and dehydrating others. If the field isn't moist enough, the heat can start a forest fire and such.

5)Name: Petal Dance
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: Daniwa casts a storm of petals as long as there are some that multiplies the quantity and sends them in motion like an armor copying Daniwa's moves so if she were to punch, a layer of petals that revolve around her arm would do the same doubling the damage. This jutsu can only be up as long as she doesn't use any jutsu after activating this one or else the armor will disperse.

6)Name: Cross Cut
Element: Earth
Skill: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Description: The roots that travel up the middle of Sow-Byoku sever the blade in half allowing Daniwa to use two blades in battle. The main attack activated by severing the blades is creating an X formation by intersecting the blades and drawing them apart on the opponent leaving deep and possibly severe gash wounds if she raised the temperature of the blade in any way.

7)Name: Doomy-Mosh
Rank: Kid Lv.
Species: Venus Fly Trap
Looks: Daniwa Red_Venus_flytrap
Origin: Her family pets offspring
Type: Combat
Jutsu:

Name: Poison Darts
Rank: C
Element: earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: mid(5-10m)
Description: From the mouth of Doomy comes 5 purple thin needle like objects that strike aimlessly in the direction of the opponent. The effect of 1 successful hit is an irritating pinch. The effect of 2 is stunning a struck limb for a post. The effect of 3 is stunning for one post from each battler before recovery. The effects of 4 or 5 are stunning for one post from each battler before recovering and 5 posts of minor poisoning that deducts very small portions of health and doubling the amount every time a move made by the victim consumes chakra. This means when a victim of the jutsu uses a jutsu or attack that involves using chakra. Doomy-Mosh does not steal chakra. The poison justs increases in damage. Poison darts can be used in succession to be more effective in its doubling traits but after being used 5 times, Doomy-Mosh leaves.

8)Name: Doomy Dum
Rank: Adolescent Lv.
Species: Venus Fly Trap
Looks: A bigger version of Doomy Mosh but has dark purple petals with streaks of baby blue at the rims of each petal, his top teeth hang out of his mouth like an overbite and he drools uncontrollably. He uses a round bulb acting as a body that has two vines acting like arms and is able to move about in hops or rolls. He too sits in a pot but a much bigger one that he sinks into to get underground. Doomy Dum always returns back to his pot before leaving battle. His flower pot can shield him from Rank E-C jutsu. B, A or S will damage it causing him to retreat with that being his home.
Type: Transportation
Jutsu:

Name: Ingestive Teleport
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: All
Description: Doomy Dum's head emerges rapidly out of the ground with his mouth open and his head becomes tightened like a flower having yet to blossom. Doomy Dum swallows and she is placed out of danger which is farthest from opponent, (Doomy Dum can take her a mile and a half away as long as he or she has seen where that be), underground to make a surprise attack from below, in the wall or nearest solid standing object like a tree or behind her opponent ready to stab. Doomy Dum retreats back into his protective flower pot.

Name: Amnesiac Sputter
Rank: C
Element: n/a
Skill: Genjutsu
Range: short 0-5m
Description: Doomy Dum smuthers you in his toxic drool causing a being to forget their current whereabouts and see that they are in a darkly shimmering forest in which everyone appears to be a gooey figure taking on the actions of the people out of the genjutsu. The effects last 3 posts from the person effected.

Name: Deep Dive
Rank: C
Element: n/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Range: all
Description: Doomy Dum holds Daniwa and whoever else he may be protecting with his vine arms and delves under water or ground head first traveling as little as one foot and as far as three miles but disperses from the pressure on his head since he travels very fast.

9)Name: Rose Neck Jutsu
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Skill: Tai+Ninjutsu
Range: Short
Effect: Daniwa leaps up over head of her opponent and holds the pose of a hand stand with vines that shoot out of her wrists and wrap around her opponents neck. She then spins in a twister like fashion until the neck snaps or falls off. From sky view, her lower torso looks like a rose from the rapid spinning motion.

10)Name: Engulfing Flames
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: n/a
Effect: Daniwa cut her palms open and holds the bleeding wounds to one another. The blood and handsigns trigger a specific stream of chakra releasing fire through her open wounds for a maximum of 4 posts from the user. It can be doused with large quantities of water no higher than 30 degrees or else it'll be too warm and will evaporate. She is 400 degrees thus making close combat a risk for her opponent and an enhancement in her fire elemental jutsu with damage added by a quarter of its original. Her defense isn't perfect but it keeps her enemies a good distance back.

11)Name: Flaming Flower
Rank: A
Element: Earth & Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: n/a
Effect: Daniwa casts out a giant flower from the palm of her hand that acts as a giant shield that sucks up the chakra put into the attack and supplies Daniwa with what it caught through the vine that connects the two. It only works best during Ninjutsu based moves and does nothing to prevent Genjutsu. If severed, the flower wilts and disperses and Daniwa's jutsu is cancelled. The flower also catches fire for just that moment when it senses taijutsu or weaponry to burn the target or warn Daniwa before if blows up into smaller petals that comes in handy for Petal Dance.

12)Name: Ashu Ray's Mad Dance
Element: Fire
Skill: Weaponry+Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: All
Description: Ashu Ray the giant shuriken he wears on his back is sent hurtling on a slant allowing it to slice but continue going on in a curved direction so as to circle the being it targeted and fire keeps it drawn to the body of the victim so that as it resumes its circling it cuts deeper and deeper till Daniwa draws it back to her.


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The Doom Flower
Chuunin
Chuunin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue100/100Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
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Post by The Doom Flower Mon Feb 16, 2009 11:25 am

13)Name: Summoning Technique [Kuchiyose no Jutsu]
Element: n/a
Skill: Offensive
Range: n/a
Description: The basic form of all summoning techniques, this jutsu uses a contract, hand seals, and the user's blood to summon an animal or weapon from another dimension, which usually manifests once the ninja summoner strikes his hand against any surface, after which the specific summon will appear. As an alternative to the normal hand seals, the same contract that appears on the ground during the summoning can be drawn by hand and activated, producing the same result. The type of animal summoned is determined by the contract. The blood is used as a signature to make the contract, which can be written on a scroll or tattoo, valid. Once summoned, the animal can perform a task or help the user in battle.

Name: Durashi
Rank: Boss Lv.
Species: Man Plant
Looks: Picture! Now beneath him is a series of vines he uses to travel faster but he normally hops about. He uses his flower like eyes to sneek up on others from underground. Inside his mouth is acidic saliva that will dissolve anything on contact. Along the rims of the petals in his mouth are teeth 3 feet long and 2 feet wide. They can normally penetrate anything on their own but if they can't, the saliva softens the object enabling easier chewing. If his teeth are knocked out or damaged in any way, they are replaced shortly after with a brand new one. His vines are very thick and rope like with a greater toughness. They can be chopped off but like his teeth, they grow back but unlike his teeth, they grow back in greater numbers. His eating is quite unstoppable when you think about it. Explosive tags act as gas when eaten and sometimes don't make it past the acidic saliva. In general, this heals him and with out an empty stomach, he is very strong. He has a strong sense of smell allowing him to smell out anyone/thing and his eyes are quite the average. At his sides are two vines that cannot be removed because of their arm like mimicry and scaled sides that are like natural shields he uses the way Daniwa uses Gauntlets. Durashi's head is equal to the size of his body which in general makes him look like two separate beings but it reveals his only weakness which is at his neck. It can be severed but Durashi can bud and sprout a new body within 3 posts. Otherwise he rolls around on his head. Durashi may have great immunities but like all things, he can die. His greatest weakness is being eaten. Yes, his acidic insides will decay his predator from the inside out but he's done for too. Durashi lives by the motto, "Eat or be eaten." Durashi also dislikes too much water. He tends to wilt and grow more limp the longer he remains within a wet terrain but loves the sunlight. Regardless, his acid levels are lowered proving less toxic as he remains wet from the water diffusing through his body and he becomes more of a vulnerable vegetable.
Type: Offensive
Jutsu:

Name: Tunneling Jutsu
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu (?) [He's just eating his way through...]
Rank: C
Range: All
Description: Durashi dives underground eating what's in his way to replenish health by a little for every post he remains under. He travels much faster than Doomy-Dum but makes small holes regardless of his great size. It would appear as if a human had made the hole. He uses this to his advantage in escaping or tracking much faster than he would above ground.

Name: Forest Frenzy
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: long
Description: Durashi thrust vines below his body down into the ground sending pulsations to other plant life within a half a mile of Durashi 360 degrees. Once the pulsations are recieved, the plants develop the ability of mobility within one spot. They are still rooted in but trees for example, can reach out with their branches at an enemy. The manipulated plants are from then on told through Durashi's pulsations who the enemy was/is and they act aggressively upon him/her. This jutsu ends when he uses another jutsu.

Name: Blossoming Beauty
Element: Fire or Unknown
Skill: Taijutsu
Rank: S
Range: All
Description: Durashi's flower head completely opens so that it appears to be a regular flower excluding the fact that there are teeth aligned on every millimeter of each petals rim. The light of the sun or moon gather at the center of the "flower" forming a light of a deep orange (sunlight) or a light of a pale blue (moonlight). If it be orange, than a blast of fire up to 350 degrees is released upon the terrain drying up blood vessels of humans within 2 miles of Durashi. The longer they stay, the more they'll dry up till they prune and die. The only way out of this jutsu while remaining within the 2 miles is with a defensive jutsu S ranked that lasts at least 3 posts. Daniwa is kept safe from this version beneath Durashi in a pit his vines make. If the light be a pale blue, an extreme pressure is put on everyone within 2 miles that drags them to the ground with glowing aura's at their hands and feet keeping them still for a single post. The farther they are from him, the less pressure they face and more mobile they are. The enormous pressure causes damage to them and if a shinobi has direct contact with the caster of the justu (Durashi) he/she will evidentally take on great pressure that turns their body inside out with instant death. This proves more risky because Daniwa is only safe if she is within his other jutsu, Doom Flower Manipulation. Durashi's jutsu can only be cut short if a ninja finds a way to close his mouth for he will swallow the attack and retreat from the battle.

Name: Doom Flower Manipulation
Element: n/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: n/a
Description: Durashi and Daniwa's lives are entertwined into one in which she takes on his great endurance, acidic salivary glands, enhanced agility, tougher skin, combined chakra, more jutsu and a lust for death. She is no longer driven by clear thoughts but only objectives such as killing the enemy and protecting the client...if he/she doesn't pose a threat. Emotions are limited to hate sassiness that trigger specific jutsu. She can only take on one form.This jutsu lasts as long as Durashi is present. The only flaw is that if one dies, so does the other. Under this jutsu, Daniwa's skin turns a pale seafoam green and the whites of her eyes are yellow and seductive. For every turn that Daniwa is in S.S. or H.H. form, it costs him 2 chakra.

Name: Toxic Flames
Element: Earth+Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: long
Description: Durashi releases purple embers which are the size of basket balls to humans at a whopping 300 degrees. They fumigate a toxic gas and cause a toxic burn. The intoxication from thou who is effected recieves 5 posts of minor poisoning that deducts very small portions of health and doubling the amount every time a move made by the victim consumes chakra.

Name: Belly Smack
Element: n/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Range: short
Description: Durashi smacks himself with his head and falls over onto his back. This causes him to stun himself while ridding himself of enemies that have climbed onto him and is a replenisher of chakra. WHen Durashi stuns himself, his body relaxes allowing him to regenerate chakra but not as easily as he can heal. As long as Durashi is stunned, he regains chakra by 3's. During the amount of time he remains stunned his jutsu grow weaker and more easier to avoid, that is-while he is unconscious.

14)Name: S.S. Toxic Tounging
Element: n/a
Skill: Tai+Nin
Rank: B
Range: short
Description: Daniwa kisses her opponent like she does during Venomous Kiss but this time the toxins in her mouth are far more effective and enough can cause it to be exposed to the persons bloodstream in which they develop internal pains and bleeding as well as corrupt white blood cells. They go more into a daze rather than KO but they are still immobile for 3 posts as soon as she kisses him/her.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

15)Name: S.S. Infatuative Gaze
Element: n/a
Skill: Tai+Nin
Rank: B
Range: Short-med
Description: Daniwa casts a seductive gaze upon her opponent and once their eyes lock, she numbs their body and can make them do "1" thing including jutsu. It can be as simple as running her an errand to as extreme as getting them to kill somebody before they regain consciousness. As long as it is said within one statement, her wishes will be accurately exicuted. Jounin rank and higher do not fall as easily into her jutsu as Chuunin and below thus making them only as capable as doing her quick jutsu but mental tasks are incapable of effecting jounin and higher rank. She can only use this on a person once throughout an entire battle. This only works on the opposite sex.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

16)Name: S.S. Sneaking Strike
Element: n/a
Skill: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Range: short-med
Description: Daniwa's Sow-Byoku is in two pieces, one per calf with the sharp end jutting out of its place on her leg. What she does is mount herself up and moves her legs quickly like scissors in order to sever or make quick strikes at her opponent.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

17)Name: S.S. Blossoming Flower
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: n/a
Description: Daniwa's greenish skin turns into pale pink petals bursting off her clothes and revealing her bare body as an elegant pale figure with moss over her chest and lower torso like revealing undergarments barely covering what needed to be. With this, she can make physical contact with anybody and it will either heal their health, chakra or raise their accuracy. This form lasts as long as Durashi is out. Daniwa pays 2 of her chakra per post of mine that she is in this form and can give up to 5 chakra to thou she touches from herself and a somewhat higher amount of health and accuracy.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

18)Name: H.H. Vine Massacre
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: All
Description: Daniwa thrusts her palms together and then, from beneath her emerge vines of black that are razor sharp and have great speed. They are as thin as hair but slice like a hot knife through butter. They withdraw as soon as she moves from her spot and wherever she moves next, new vines emerge. She can only use this twice throughout an entire battle. The jutsu wears off as soon as a new jutsu is put into play.
{A Hateful Heroine Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

19)Name: H.H. Inferno Bomb
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: all
Description: Daniwa cuffs her hands around her mouth and exhales. Through it comes an inferno sized fire ball (refferring to her first jutsu) barely visible and when she wrenches her hands tightly shut, it causes an explosion. Once again, it is barely visible making it hard to determine where it is going, in the daytime. At night, it's much easier to see.
{A Hateful Heroine Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

20)Name: H.H. Raging Fury
Element: n/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: all
Description: Daniwa gathers all bad thoughts and releases them through her attacks by enhancing each move she makes by quite a bit. Negative things in H.H. form becomes her stength thus making this very useful. A simple punch could knock an enemy a few feet back without much effort. This lasts until a jutsu above its rank is used.
{A Hateful Heroine Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

21)Name: H.H. Burning Flower
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: n/a
Description: Daniwa's greenish skin turns into dark red petals burning off her clothes and revealing her bare body as an elegant pale figure with skin tight leather over her chest and lower torso revealing undergarments barely covering what needed to be. With this she can make physical contact with anybody and it will either steal health, chakra or lower their accuracy. This lasts as long as Durashi is out. Daniwa pays 3 of her chakra per post of mine that she is in this form and can take up to 5 chakra to thou she touches and a somewhat higher amount of health and accuracy giving it to herself.
{A Hateful Heroine Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}


Last edited by The Doom Flower on Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:41 am; edited 4 times in total
The Doom Flower
The Doom Flower
Chuunin
Chuunin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue100/100Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

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Post by YonYon Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:02 pm

Approved
YonYon
YonYon
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue200/200Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)
Nickname: Silent As The Forest

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Post by Paksennarion Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:16 pm

Wait, wait, wait. Lots of these jutsu have some issues with them.

But, first off, Doom-san are you done with your app.? I thought you still had to add some things?
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Anbu
Anbu


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue169/169Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (169/169)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue40/40Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (40/40)
Nickname: The Poisoned Willow

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Post by Paksennarion Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:50 pm

I've been asked to write this up. XP

The Doom Flower wrote:10)Name: Engulfing Flames
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: n/a
Effect: Daniwa cut her palms open and holds the bleeding wounds to one another. The blood produces heat that travels from her hands to her entire body that allows her body to be covered in fire. The fire strengthens her in attack and defends her from close combat since she is over 150 degrees. If she is struck with fire she can simply absorb it and strengthen herself even more and can only be put out with about 50 gallons of water at -5 degrees farenheit.

How does her blood do this? Also, this would probably take some amount of chakra each turn to maintain. The weakness seems unfair, and I'd lower that. Personally, the 150 degrees thing seems strong, but I'd like a second opinion on it myself.

The Doom Flower wrote:11)Name: Flaming Flower
Rank: A
Element: Earth & Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: n/a
Effect: Daniwa casts out a giant flower from the palm of her hand that acts as a giant shield that sucks up the chakra put into the attack and supplies Daniwa with what it caught through the vine that connects the two. If severed, the flower wilts and disperses and Daniwa's jutsu is canceled. The flower also catches fire when it senses taijutsu or weaponry to burn the target or worn Daniwa before if blows up into smaller petals that comes in handy for Petal Dance.

First off, does this jutsu work against all kinds of attacks? Or just Ninjutsu? Also, does Daniwa get the same amount of chakra as the user spent to preform that jutsu? And is there a limit to the rank or amount of jutsu it can absorb? If the flower catches fire, does it burn or can it stay lit on fire for a while?

The summons Durashi... I'm not sure about him. It seems somewhat, really strong. I dunno though, I'd like a second opinion on that one too. Also, is it possible for you to put the summons together? It's a bit confusing how you have the jutsu set up at the moment. And you're also lacking the Kuchiyose no jutsu.

The Doom Flower wrote:Name: Tunneling Jutsu
Element: Earth
Skill: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Range: All
Description: Durashi dives underground eating what's in his way to replenish health. (Eating in general makes him feel better.) He travels much faster than Doomy-Dum but makes small holes regardless of his great size. It would appear as if a human had made the hole. He uses this to his advantage in escaping or tracking much faster than he would above ground.

How strong is this "replenishing" ability? Also, I think this should be a C rank, and it isn't really Taijutsu either, more like Ninjutsu.

The Doom Flower wrote:Name: Forest Frenzy
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: long
Description: Durashi thrust vines below his body down into the ground sending pulsations to other plant life within a mile of Durashi 360 degrees. Once the pulsations are recieved, the plants develop the ability of mobility within one spot. They are still rooted in but trees for example, can reach out with their branches at an enemy. The manipulated plants are from then on told through Durashi's pulsations who the enemy was/is and they act aggressively upon him/her.

A mile is too much. Also, how long does this jutsu last?

The Doom Flower wrote:Name: Blossoming Beauty
Element: Fire or Unknown
Skill: Taijutsu
Rank: S
Range: All
Description: Durashi's flower head completely opens so that it appears to be a regular flower excluding the fact that there are teeth aligned on every millimeter of each petals rim. The light of the sun or moon gather at the center of the "flower" forming a light of a deep orange (sunlight) or a light of a pale blue (moonlight). If it be orange, than a blast of fire over 5,000 degrees is showered over 5 miles of the terrain casting fire over everything and drying up the blood vessels on the skin of humans causing them to dry up like flowers neglected of water till they prune and die. The only way out of this jutsu is with a defensive jutsu S ranked that lasts at least 3 posts. If that is put into play by a ninja, than they only suffer of mirages that Durashi uses in order to eat them. Daniwa is kept safe from this version beneath Durashi in a pit his vines make. If the light be a pale blue, an extreme pressure is put on everyone that drags them to the ground with glowing aura's at their hands and feet keeping them still for a single post. The enormous pressure causes great damage to them and if a shinobi has direct contact with the caster of the justu (Durashi) he/she will evidentally take on great pressure that turns their body inside out with instant death. This proves more risky because Daniwa is only safe if she is within his other jutsu, Doom Flower Manipulation.

...This is extremely OP. Please tune it down.

The Doom Flower wrote:Name: Doom Flower Manipulation
Element: n/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: n/a
Description: Durashi and Daniwa's lives are entertwined into one in which she takes on his great endurance, acidic salivary glands, enhanced agility, tougher skin, more jutsu () and a lust for death. She is no longer driven by clear thoughts but only objectives such as killing the enemy and protecting the client...if he/she doesn't pose a threat. Emotions are limited to hate sassiness that trigger specific jutsu. She can only take on one form.This jutsu lasts as long as Durashi is present. The only flaw is that if one dies, so does the other. Under this jutsu, Daniwa's skin turns a pale seafoam green and the whites of her eyes are yellow and seductive.

This needs a CK cost per turn it's activated since it's like a transformation.

The Doom Flower wrote:Name: Toxic Flames
Element: Earth+Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: long
Description: Durashi releases purple embers which are the size of basket balls to humans. They fumigate a toxic gas and cause a toxic burn. The intoxication lasts 5 posts from thou who is effected.

Please explain this better. What exactly does the toxic gas do?

The Doom Flower wrote:Name: Belly Smack
Element: n/a
Skill: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Range: short
Description: Durashi smacks himself with his head and falls over onto his back. This causes him to stun himself while ridding himself of enemies that have climbed onto him and is a replenisher of chakra. As long as Durashi is stunned, he regains chakra by 5's. In one post, Durashi can replenish 25 points of chakra.

This definitely should not be a D rank. How would this replenish CK? Also, that last sentence makes no sense whatsoever. If anything, the 5 CK is too much. Also, it would work turn by turn, probably. As in 5 CK per turn.

The Doom Flower wrote:14)Name: S.S. Toxic Tounging
Element: n/a
Skill: Tai+Nin
Rank: C
Range: short
Description: Daniwa kisses her opponent like she does during Venomous Kiss but this time the toxins in her mouth are far more effective and enough can cause it to be exposed to the persons bloodstream in which they develop internal pains and bleeding as well as corrupt white blood cells. They go more into a daze rather than KO but they are still immobile for 3 posts as soon as she kisses him/her.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

B rank.

The Doom Flower wrote:15)Name: S.S. Infatuative Gaze
Element: n/a
Skill: Tai+Nin
Rank: C
Range: Short-med
Description: Daniwa casts a seductive gaze upon her opponent and once their eyes lock, she numbs their body and can make them do "1" thing including jutsu. She can only use this on a person once throughout an entire battle. This only works on the opposite sex.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

This is really strong, even with the limiters. It's definitely not C rank material at the least. How strong does this go? I mean, she could get them to slit their throat. Can it make them do something so extreme? Or is it only minor things? Please explain more.

The Doom Flower wrote:16)Name: S.S. Fantasy
Element: n/a
Skill: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Range: short-med
Description: Daniwa puts her opponent in a Genjutsu in which she is able to pick out someone they strongly desire and supply them with him/her mentally keeping them distracted while she killed him/her. The person who is in the genjutsu only feels the pain slightly while they think something else is really overwhelming their body.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

Daniwa doesn't have Genjutsu as a skill and this would be a higher rank.

The Doom Flower wrote:17)Name: S.S. Blossoming Flower
Element: Earth
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: n/a
Description: Daniwa's greenish skin turns into pale pink petals bursting off her clothes and revealing her bare body as an elegant pale figure with moss over her chest and lower torso like revealing undergarments barely covering what needed to be. With this, she can make physical contact with anybody and it will either heal their health, chakra or raise their accuracy. This form lasts as long as Durashi is out.
{A Sassy Sweatheart Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

You need a CK cost per turn activated since it's another transformation. Also, how much CK/HP would this heal per touch?

The Doom Flower wrote:19)Name: H.H. Inferno Bomb
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: all
Description: Daniwa cuffs her hands around her mouth and exhales. Through it comes an inferno sized fire ball barely visible and when she wrenches her hands tightly shut, it causes an explosion. Once again, it is barely visible making it hard to determine where it is going, in the daytime. At night, it's much easier to see.
{A Hateful Heroine Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

Why is it barely visible if it's such a large size?

The Doom Flower wrote:20)Name: H.H. Raging Fury
Element: n/a
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: all
Description: Daniwa gathers all bad thoughts and releases them through her attacks by enhancing each move she makes by quite a bit. A simple punch could knock an enemy a few feet back without much effort. This lasts until a jutsu above its rank is used.
{A Hateful Heroine Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

Again, how does this work? Why would bad thoughts enhance her strength?

The Doom Flower wrote:21)Name: H.H. Burning Flower
Element: Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Range: n/a
Description: Daniwa's greenish skin turns into dark red petals burning off her clothes and revealing her bare body as an elegant pale figure with skin tight leather over her chest and lower torso revealing undergarments barely covering what needed to be. With this she can make physical contact with anybody and it will either steal health, chakra or lower their accuracy. This lasts as long as Durashi is out.
{A Hateful Heroine Jutsu Formed From Doom Flower Manipulation}

You need a CK cost per turn activated, and also a set amount for the CK/HP and accuracy lowered. Since HP and accuracy aren't counted as points and such, please just write something that would explain the extent of the jutsu.
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Anbu
Anbu


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue169/169Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (169/169)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue40/40Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (40/40)
Nickname: The Poisoned Willow

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Post by The Doom Flower Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:02 pm

*Phew, fixed it*
The Doom Flower
The Doom Flower
Chuunin
Chuunin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue100/100Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
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Post by Paksennarion Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:32 pm

The Doom Flower wrote:11)Name: Flaming Flower
Rank: A
Element: Earth & Fire
Skill: Ninjutsu
Range: n/a
Effect: Daniwa casts out a giant flower from the palm of her hand that acts as a giant shield that sucks up the chakra put into the attack and supplies Daniwa with what it caught through the vine that connects the two. It only works best during Ninjutsu based moves. If severed, the flower wilts and disperses and Daniwa's jutsu is cancelled. The flower also catches fire for just that moment when it senses taijutsu or weaponry to burn the target or warn Daniwa before if blows up into smaller petals that comes in handy for Petal Dance.

Please set a limit to the rank of jutsu this could effect. Also, Genjutsu should be out of the realm of it's effect I'd think...

I still don't like Blossoming Beauty.

I think that Doom Flower Manipulation should cost them both CK points since it's a joint jutsu, and also occur every post, not every two. However, splitting it to 2 CK per turn for each of them seems valid.

Belly Smack still seems strong, 5 CK for a C rank that is. Also, while Durashi is stunned, do his other jutsu still in effect continue to work?

With S.S Blossoming Flower, by give up do you mean that she looses that amount and transfers it to the other person?

H.H Raging Fury still doesn't seem to make sense.

When using H.H. Burning Flower, does Daniwa receive the CK/HP etc. that she saps from an opponent?

Those are my main complaints. However, I'd like someone else to look at this 'cause I may be missing something. Sorry for all the work Doom-san. T.T
Paksennarion
Paksennarion
Anbu
Anbu


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue169/169Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (169/169)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue40/40Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (40/40)
Nickname: The Poisoned Willow

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Post by The Doom Flower Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:57 pm

There. ><; Hope it's better.
The Doom Flower
The Doom Flower
Chuunin
Chuunin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue100/100Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

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Post by YonYon Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:47 pm

approved
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YonYon
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue210/210Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Daniwa Left_bar_bleue200/200Daniwa Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)
Nickname: Silent As The Forest

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