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Post by MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind Tue Jul 07, 2009 11:14 am

Character Information

Name: Marluxia Kiryuu

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Place of Birth: Village hidden in the sand

Appearance: Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Sandwa11

Personality: He has an inward focus and is never the life of the party. He has a strong sense of self that can make him feel highly self-conscious around other people – making walking into a crowded room a little nerve-wracking. He can be extremely witty.

He processes his emotions, thoughts, and observations internally. He can be social with people, but reveal less about himself than other people do. He is more private, and less public. He needs time to think before responding to a situation, and develop his ideas by reflecting privately. His personality traits can be passionate, but not usually aggressive unless some one he loves or cares about is hurt.



Likes:


*The Quiet...



*Wind preferably cold




* siting under Cherry Blossom Trees






Dislikes:


*people who never shut up



*stagnant air



*fish especially sushi





History: Born and raised in Village hidden in the sand a small village deep in the land of Wind but was exiled after the mysterious death of both his parents he walked for many days with no human contact until he got to the edge of the land of fire were he fainted from exhaustion and was found by an older lady who lived of the land and was once a ninja he lived with her until he was twelve then she sent him to Konaha to get supplies with a small bag of yen half way there he was mugged by to men dressed in black cloaks they took his money than stabbed him in the stomach and left him there to die. for 11 hours days he lay there bleeding untill the old lady got worried and came after him she found him on the ground next to a cherry blossom tree mostly dead. She brought him back to the little hut and treated his wounds when he was finally healed the old lady decided to teach him the ways of the ninja and how to fight. after 5 years of training a bizarre ability started to surface that he could use to compress common air into something harder than steel at first he could only make small dagger like weapons than after honing the skill he was able to make larger weapons like the sword shown above. he continued to live with the old lady. then on his 20 birthday she died of a heart attack (damn you light yagami lol joking) she was cluching a letter that with a silver necklace in it(the one hes wearing above) the letter said "i give you my entire fortune and this necklace do not take either lightly" he later found out that she also left an apartment in Hidden sand village (sense he is older no one recognizes him) for him he moved his few belongings into the apartment where he currently lives wondering how to become a ranked ninja in the village and after a year the Kazekage became be came vary Ill he sent out his advisorer to find his heir they fibaly decided that Marluxia was. Than 1 day the kazekage finally died But now that he was dead Marluxia was finally alone in this world but now he was the new kazekage (yah!!!)

Ninja ID

Village: Hidden sand

Rank: Kazekage

element: wind, fire

Nindo: Never stop fighting till the day you die.

Skills:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Weaponry kenjutsu

Skills Points:210
Ninjutsu: 95
Taijutsu: 65
Weaponry: 20
Kenjutsu:30



Equipment: nothing except clothes and his necklace

Fighting Styles: Relies on strong heavy strikes but can still defend

Jutsu:

Blast:
Ninjutsu
Rank-S
Description: Can cause an explosion of wind and fire in any place within a mile radius can change the size of the explosion from a grenade-to nuclear blast incinerating things while making it hard to doge

Shock Wave
Ninjutsu
Rank-S
Description: a large barrier forms around the user that if touches will cause a blast of air knocking the person down, ripping off a limb, or totally crushing the foe (he usually is using this constantly so he cant be caught by surprise.)

Phoenix Flower Jutsu
ninjutsu
Rank-B
Description: shoots a large Fire ball at the enemy that explodes on contact burning the foe into dust. can also shoot more that 1
at a time

Flurry
Taijutsu
Rank-B
Description:punches the enemy in the stomach several times damaging organs and then kick them in the face sending them spinning into the distance there are several versions of this but that's the one he uses

Shred
Ninjutsu
Rank-A
Description:sends a blast of wind from his hand that shreds and rips any thing that it touches even buildings, people, armor, (ect)

Chakra absorption
Type: Taijutsu
Rank-C
Description: This jutsu allows the user to absorb the opponents chakra, thus draining their energy - and strength. It is used from the palm of the hand, and appears as a tiny chakra flame around the fist.

Shadow Clone jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank-B
Description: A forbidden jutsu, that creates clones - which are not just plain illusions (like the normal bunshin no jutsu). Each clone is an exact replica of Marluxia, capable of attacking. a direct hit causes the clone to disappear.

Gust
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank-C
Description: A jutsu that creates large gusts of wind after a blade strike.

Body Freeze
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank-C
Description: Causes an opponent to loose their sense of movement. Stops the opponent, leaving an opening for more powerful jutsu to be performed.

Body Substitute
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank-D
Description: A common jutsu - used to quickly replace a body with a close by object. Creates confusing among the opponent(s) - creating a chance to escape, or return with a larger strike. Useful for avoiding attacks, and hiding from potential enemies.

Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Description:Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.

Clone Technique

Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Tansformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: ninjutsu
Description: allows the ninja to tranform themself into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Escaping jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Escape jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Clan Information: none


Clan: none

Kekkei Genkai: Wind Shard

Description:can conpress air into almost any weapon the weapons are always silver and jet black

Clan weapon:none

Clan History: none

Misc. Information

RP sample: Marluxia walked into a barren field in a clearing in the forest the wind making waves in the tall grass and makeing the necklace around his neck jingle "where is he? we where suposed to meet an hour ago" he says quietly to himself to his left he hears the piter pater of feet to his left with one swift movement he formed a triangular shaped shruikan and through launched it from his hand then heard the soft noise as someone gasped and the shurikan sunk into the skin he calmly walked over to the noise of someone twitching on the ground the man was dressed like a ninja with a scare on his right eye "just as i thought an assassin the Shurikan had already disappeared turned back into air "guess ill have to get the money some other time" he calmly walked of into the forest with the sun at his back 🔚

How did you find us?: i was referred to it by Paksennarion from the bleach site

Nicknames: some people call him Mark instead of Marluxia although he hates it


Last edited by MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind on Sat Jul 11, 2009 10:42 am; edited 13 times in total
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
Kazekage
Kazekage


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue200/220Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (200/220)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue390/390Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (390/390)
Nickname:

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Post by Dr.Strange Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:09 pm

You don't have to Join the Leaf Village. You can join The Sand and be there Kazekage (>.>) also um... no custom Villages unless you Conquer one and rename it Smile
Dr.Strange
Dr.Strange
God of Conquest
God of Conquest


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue210/210Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue100/100Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname: The Devil's Knight

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Post by Dr.Strange Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:04 pm

Kenjutsu = Swordsmenship

and you get 210 SP.
Dr.Strange
Dr.Strange
God of Conquest
God of Conquest


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue210/210Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue100/100Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname: The Devil's Knight

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Post by MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:02 pm

nvm
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
Kazekage
Kazekage


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue200/220Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (200/220)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue390/390Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (390/390)
Nickname:

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Post by YonYon Wed Jul 08, 2009 9:38 am

the speed is denied <_<

and describe jutsu more
YonYon
YonYon
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue210/210Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue200/200Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)
Nickname: Silent As The Forest

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Post by Seisoku Kedamono Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:53 am

Describe wind Blade more..It;s an S rank..It should have more of a description

Also Gust doesn't have a rank..What is it's rank?
Seisoku Kedamono
Seisoku Kedamono
Jounin
Jounin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue210/210Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue350/350Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (350/350)
Nickname: Death Angel

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Post by YonYon Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:24 am

Shadow Clone is b rank, and a single hit no matter how strong or weak makes them vanish
YonYon
YonYon
Genin
Genin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue210/210Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue200/200Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)
Nickname: Silent As The Forest

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Post by MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:37 am

ok i think everthing is perfect now pls approve
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
Kazekage
Kazekage


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue200/220Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (200/220)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue390/390Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (390/390)
Nickname:

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Post by Seisoku Kedamono Wed Jul 08, 2009 11:41 am

One more thing. Put the rest of the academy jutsus. You only have one (The substitution)
Seisoku Kedamono
Seisoku Kedamono
Jounin
Jounin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue210/210Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue350/350Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (350/350)
Nickname: Death Angel

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Post by MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind Wed Jul 08, 2009 12:06 pm

OK now its perfect lol
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
MarluxiaOfTheBladedWind
Kazekage
Kazekage


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue200/220Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (200/220)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue390/390Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (390/390)
Nickname:

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Post by Seisoku Kedamono Wed Jul 08, 2009 12:08 pm

Looks fine to me

~Approved
Seisoku Kedamono
Seisoku Kedamono
Jounin
Jounin


Character sheet
Chakra:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue210/210Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Left_bar_bleue350/350Marluxia Of The Bladed Wind Empty_bar_bleue  (350/350)
Nickname: Death Angel

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