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Post by Egress Uchiha on Mon May 25, 2009 5:34 pm

Character Information

Name: Egress Uchiha

Age: 11

Gender: Male

Appearance:


Personality: Egress is usually serious and takes care of the people important to him. He's serious and completes all of his missions. Egress has survived many deathmatches in his life and has a warm spot and watches all over the village and his students. He only swores to protect his clan and destory all those who opposes his life and village. He always gets angry wheneevr he's around Senju clan members and one of his goals is to destroy them for treating his clan like slaves.

However, to do so he must seek ever greater more power constantly and rank up as a ninja, even at the cost of his own village, he must turn sides and join an infamous organization to complete all of his personal goals.

Likes: He likes battle and he likes to eat ramen and chicken.









Dislikes: He dislikes the Senju clan.









History:
Egress is an Uchiha where his parents trained him as a child starting at age 6. Feeling like he never had a family, Egress had extreme training alone in the Uchiha training grounds. Discovering the clan's man jutsu- the Fireball technique, Egress spends time to one day to succesfully mastered the Fireball Jutsu. Showing to his father, he was quite proud and acknowledged his own son as an uchiha! However, discovering the Uchiha coup de'tat, Egress wanted to assist his family into taking over the village.... while in the meantime slowing them down.

Soon after the Uchiha massacre, he never found out the fate of his parents. He attended the ninja academy, to enter the world as Shinobi. There, he practiced with ninja tools and became the best of his class. Hiding a secret Uchiha scroll, he studys for a few months on the Uchiha techniques, without even showing them.Due to his long training, Egress almost fell out of a humangous tree and almost crushed his skull, killing himself. Due to the situation, Egress awakened his sharingan and was able to maintain balance, beginning his life as ninja!


Ninja ID

Village: Leaf

Rank: Academy Student

element: NONE

Nindo: To honor and protect my clan and village and protect his comrades and everybody important to him.

Skills: Ninjutsu, Weaponry(kenjutsu), taijutsu, genjutsu

Skills Points:

For example:

Ninjutsu: 0
Genjutsu: 0
Weaponry: 0
Taijutsu: 0

Equipment:
x20 kunai
x20 shuriken
x3 demon wind shuriken
x20 scroll
x20 tags


Jutsu:
NO Jutsus Yet

Clan Information


Clan: Uchiha

Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan (one tomae), i really dont think i have to explain this.

Description: Nor dis.

Clan weapon: None

Clan History: The Uchiha clan were one of the founding noble families of Leaf village. The clan itself is said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. This made them prime candidates to help found the Konoha Military Police Corps. The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo.

Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. It also gives one the ability to cast jutsu techniques only possible by possessing the eye.

The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member.



RP sample:
" I'll back you up"

"'Earth Style: Head Hunter Groundhog Jutsu (Double Suicide Decipitation Technique)"

Egress heads and travels underground.....
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Egress's hand appear out of the ground and pulled fredo down to the ground up to the neck. The fire came closer and reached fredo, the flames concealing and burning him....

Egress swifted away to face nami and harry...

"Sharingan!"

Time for the real battle to start
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'What a massive compression of chakra..." Egress analyzed...

"Time for my best jutsu.."

"Chidori! 1000 Birds!!"

With Zero aiming for Nami, Egress aimed for Harry.

With both of the jutsus connecting..... thr fight will be over....
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Egress dodged all those kunais but had two cut off part of his hair...

Another mystery ninja......

Shame all three fo your other comrades have died.....

Egress glares his Sharingan at him.....

Hmmm, something feels familiar abotu him.... he thought


Naruto Way:
Sharingan!
Lighting Blade!
Egress charges in and stabs a rib of SonicWave's
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Egress performs a mixture of handsigns
Fire Style: Great Dragon Inferno
Two huge dragonheads appeared in each hand. Egress goes underground and throws the huge dragonheads up from the groundhole upward to SonicWave, the dragonheads flamed SonicWave's body, but missed as the heads fly away.
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With SonicWave distracted, Egress teleports away.
"Body Teleportation!"
His whole body teleports back to Konoha, using a diserable amount of chakra.
Lord Dread, I have the plans!

My First Day at Naruto Life:
Egress Uchiha walsk into the academy of the twilight Village. He enters the classroom adn sits upon a desk... He suddenly notices a great ninja before him... " Hello, I wish to become a ninja of the Twilight Village

You may call me Egress- Egress Uchiha, orphan of the Leaf. And what may i call you, sensei? (Zero-sensei?)


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Nicknames: None


Last edited by Egress Uchiha on Sun May 31, 2009 2:33 pm; edited 6 times in total
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Re: Egress Uchiha

Post by Seisoku Kedamono on Mon May 25, 2009 6:21 pm

Ok I shall go in order...

Put more like/Dislikes

Egress Uchiha wrote:History:
Egress is half Hatake and half Uchiha, where his parents imbued him with incredible power it can surpass any Genin.



Half Uchiha/Hatake...I do not think we allow these types of things.

Anyway, put way more history then what you have.

Also as an academy student you can only have one element.

And you start off with no jutsus or skill points in the beginning

Also if you want to be a Uchiha, you cant have the three tomoe sharingan at the rank you want.

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Re: Egress Uchiha

Post by YonYon on Tue May 26, 2009 3:24 am

Cant conbine clans

Only 1 Tomeo Sharingan at the moment.
No Chidori
No Lightning Blade
No Full Sharingan
No White Fang Blade
AS Dont have Jutsu.
Accedemy Students dont get an Element yet.
You appear to use a JUtsu that isnt listed as one you know, remove it.
WAY LONGER HISTORY - WE Rquire about 2 Paragraphs.

Put Jutsu Discriptions
Use the Proper template we have provided.
And an Accedemy Student wouldnt have power to surpass a Genin...

No Elemental Swords yet,
You have to specify how many Kunai, Shuriken etc you are actually carrying

Twilight Village? There's no such thing, remove it
Naruto Life? Dont what that is, Somekind of Copy Paste thing? Remove that too

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Re: Egress Uchiha

Post by Egress Uchiha on Sat May 30, 2009 9:50 am

Couldnt an admin edit this for me....... format is kinda hard to read.....
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Post by YonYon on Sat May 30, 2009 12:24 pm

do it yourself...its not hard

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Post by Seisoku Kedamono on Sat May 30, 2009 12:42 pm

Seriously...It really isn't that hard...Maybe if you read them over then you will get it...

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Post by Egress Uchiha on Sun May 31, 2009 12:00 pm

i wont know who to follow... but i rather follow the jounin and the person who's close to me....
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Re: Egress Uchiha

Post by Egress Uchiha on Sun May 31, 2009 12:10 pm

okay, i reeditted...

Never did like forums with much posts and members... but i better start my life as shinobi with the others....
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Post by YonYon on Sun May 31, 2009 2:16 pm

What part of only one Tomeo Sharingan didnt you get?
no White Fang CHakra sword.
you still havent put your jutsu in the proper template
AS DONT HAVE JUTSU
You dont get an element yet

You are an accedemy Student...You dont have suberb skills...or aby skill for that matter, thats why a student <_<
You have too much equipment lower the amount

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"Neither Killing nor dieing Frightens me....I AM YOUR EXECUTIONER". - Minato Hitomi
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.............

Post by Egress Uchiha on Sun May 31, 2009 2:25 pm

sigh... there....

expecting there would be more wrong....

Egres lays dwon on the grass....
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Re: Egress Uchiha

Post by Dr.Strange on Thu Jun 04, 2009 5:55 am

This looks alright now. I'm going to let you leave the RP sample as it is.

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Post by Shinryu Jin on Thu Jun 04, 2009 6:48 am

Okay then Approved.

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Post by .:Arashi:. on Sat Jun 06, 2009 11:53 am

Take note that on here we RP in a paragraph format
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"Yeah yeah I hear yah." He replied to Rado's comment with a uncaring tone of voice, he didn't seem very interested in his opponent. Reaching for his kunai holster Hitsuji inhaled deeply calming his self down before the fight began. Going into a fighting stance with a kunai in his hand he gripped the ground with his feet. His long sleeved red shirt pressed against him as a breeze came about the area. " Okay I'll let you go first." Calmly he spoke Hitsuji must've been pretty confident of his abilities to allow his opponent to commit the first attack.

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