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Post by Joord Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:17 am

name:Oni Clan
Kekkei genkai: Demon Eye

It comes forth on the moment the wielder is in trouble or is about to die It gives him strength and Will Set him through the pure fear . It has 3 stages . first is the one eye turning red. seconde stage is turning the the othere eye red and changing there pupil . Last stage is a black eye With a red pupil. Every stage gives The User extra power and Better sight at the others there abilitys . The Person Can't call it forth Out of himself . Its not Used For Fast killing And Stuff . Only For Surviving . Most Of The People who use It Use sight Of death to make them Unable To move and Then Flee . Or If the person Really gets In the way . then tries to kill him .

Techs
Unlocks At Last Stage.
Name:Sight Of Death
Rank:S
Element:non
Skill:Genjutsu
Range:The Distance Someone Can See The eyes.
Description: Gives Someone A Vision In his head About His own death. This Makes the person Shake In Fear . It can Freeze someone but if the person can set himself Through it. then his/her fighting skills would just go a bit down.


Haijin - Ashes and Dust
Rank: KG (S)
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Art: Genjutsu, Kekki Genkai,
Description: Haijin is the jutsu that ,after making eye contact, the user makes the enemy see themselves turn to ashes and dust right before their own eyes. This jutsu transports the enemies mind into a Genjutsu World of red sand and bones of decaying creatures, it is always night. The red sand will surrond the enemy and the enemy will begin to turn to dust and ash. The fingers are the first to begin to turn to dust and ash, then the feet up, then the torso, and then the head until there is nothing left. There is a strange yet painful sensation around the enemies body as they turn to dust. This jutsu only last about 2-3 seconds in the real world but it takes about 3 minutes in the genjutsu world. While there mind is trapped in the Genjutsu world the body will curl up into a ball and the enemies breathing will become violent and harsh and the enemies eyes will become white. After this jutsu the enemy will be hospitalized and they will have nightmares for a long time.
CP: 20

Darkness From hell
Rank:C
Element:N/A
Range: N/A
Art: Genjutsu, Kekki Genkai
Description: When Making Eye Contact And Have Done the Right Handsigns , a Flash Goes Into the enemys Eyes . After opening His Eyes The Person Will See That The Area Is turned Into one Dark Pit Of Darkness. Slowly Mosters Will Come Out of Darkness . The Mosters Will Start Attacking the person But The Monsters Will Only attack In the same Way The caster attacks . The jutsu acts Like a Blindness. The monsters attack in the same way as the caster but every Monster that Came Out does it . So If You Could find the right Monster You could Block Joords attacks. A way To Block This is To keep Your Eyes Closed and Trust on Your Ears for 5 min. If You fail to keep your eyes Closed You'll be traped in the genjutsu for an Half Hour



clan history:There are only a few members of the clan . these members poses the power of the demon eye. The Demon Eye Clan is Spread Over the Hole World they have people . they never fight each other even if they come to stand against each other there villages . Over years they come together to talk about what they found out and set forth the new genaration. They Join other clans to not get found out about there abilitie.
native village:almost every village . People don't really know they exists
clan's enemy: non
clan alliances: non
clan symbol:Oni Clan Clan_sign_by_DaJoord
clan weapon: Scythe
clan jutsus:Unlocks At Last Stage.


Last edited by Joord on Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:39 am; edited 4 times in total
Joord
Joord


Character sheet
Chakra:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue100/100Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Health:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue100/100Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

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Post by Shinryu Jin Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:01 am

Techs
Unlocks At Last Stage.
Sight of Death- When the enemy looks at the eyes of the user he then totaly collapse of fear . If the enemy is strong enough to put him self through it then can still fight otherwise its just the end. Most of the time People Get through it but Just fight a bit weaker .

Is this some sort of a Genjutsu? If so turn into a Jutsu and give it a rank. It seems pretty powerful too, so tone it down just a little please.

Sight of Death- When the enemy looks at the eyes of the user he then totaly collapse of fear . If the enemy is strong enough to put him self through it then can still fight otherwise its just the end. Most of the time People Get through it but Just fight a bit weaker .

Please follow the template and turn this into a Jutsu with a rank and so forth.

Dream of hell- This brings the enemy into a genjutsu that shows him hell . there he will be killed . It Will make him not able to move For a Long time .

Could you please elobarate some more on this? This seems like pretty powerful stiff. Is there a way to break it and so on. What are the draw backs to your jutsus?
Shinryu Jin
Shinryu Jin
Missing Ninja
Missing Ninja


Character sheet
Chakra:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue210/210Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue100/100Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname: The Demon of Death

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Post by Joord Thu Jul 02, 2009 6:09 am

Mhhh I edited . I Removed the other tech . Its like the same move . The Techs Can be broken on how mentaly strong the person is . If he fears death then he will need to pull himself Through it.
Joord
Joord


Character sheet
Chakra:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue100/100Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Health:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue100/100Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname:

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Post by Dr.Strange Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:57 am

Your Technique reminds me of "Killing Intent" a jutsu used by Orochimaru and it was only a C-rank skill. I suggest you add a few more jutsu and get creative. Since your eyes makes your opponent see Death use themes of death. Like Age, isolation, ect.

Example:

Haijin - Ashes and Dust
Rank: KG (S)
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Art: Genjutsu, Kekki Genkai,
Description: Haijin is the jutsu that ,after making eye contact, the user makes the enemy see themselves turn to ashes and dust right before their own eyes. This jutsu transports the enemies mind into a Genjutsu World of red sand and bones of decaying creatures, it is always night. The red sand will surrond the enemy and the enemy will begin to turn to dust and ash. The fingers are the first to begin to turn to dust and ash, then the feet up, then the torso, and then the head until there is nothing left. There is a strange yet painful sensation around the enemies body as they turn to dust. This jutsu only last about 2-3 seconds in the real world but it takes about 3 minutes in the genjutsu world. While there mind is trapped in the Genjutsu world the body will curl up into a ball and the enemies breathing will become violent and harsh and the enemies eyes will become white. After this jutsu the enemy will be hospitalized and they will have nightmares for a long time.
CP: 20
Dr.Strange
Dr.Strange
God of Conquest
God of Conquest


Character sheet
Chakra:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue210/210Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (210/210)
Health:
Oni Clan Left_bar_bleue100/100Oni Clan Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)
Nickname: The Devil's Knight

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