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Shiro Yagama (Never Mind...Not Finished)

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Shiro Yagama (Never Mind...Not Finished)

Post by Shiro on Mon Apr 20, 2009 4:25 pm

Name: Shiro Yagama

Alias/Nickname: None

Age: 11

Gender: Male

Village: Rain Village

Appearance: Shiro has a natural light tan and a nearly scar free body. He does have a scar that cuts through his right eye and continues down the right side of his body down to his abdominal muscles. He stands 5' 2" and weighs 85 and is well toned from constant training. He has shoulder length, darker than night, black hair with a few silver streaks that he often lets dangle in front of his face. He also had dark, haze filled, gray eyes.

Shiro wears a black hoody with very long sleeves. The sleeves on the hoody are long enough to reach and cover his arms and then they dangle over, letting him wield kunais and other weapons without alerting those around him. Underneath this hoody he wears a long black tank top lined with navy blue around the edges. The tank top is long enough to stretch pass his belt buckle, but he often keeps the front part tucked into his black jeans so others could see the buckle. His black jeans are in good condition considering how rough Shiro is when he gets into fights and such with the other kid. He has a pair of black combat boots which he wears long black socks with that are tucked under the pants legs. Also when Shiro removes his robe, his Ninja Pouch, holding his kunais, shurikens, smoke bombs, etc, is strapped to his right leg. He also wears his signature sterling silver, Jashin necklace which he got from his brother. He often holds for either good luck or when he prays.

Personality: Shiro is what some would call hard headed at times since he rarely listens to anyone. He does whatever he feels is necessary to survive and looks out mostly for himself. Like most kids his age, he always wants power and wants to be the best. However, unlike most kids his age, Shiro is always willing to sacrifice whatever is needed to gain it.

Elements: Doton (Earth) & Katon (Fire)

Rank: Genin

Skills: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Genjutsu

Skills Points:

Ninjutsu: 20
Genjutsu: 10
Fuuinjutsu: 0
Taijutsu: 20

Clan: None, but has the Byakugan as his bloodline.(will include in history)

Clan History: None

History: (Revising)

Intro to Shiro and Family
Spoiler:
Shiro Yamaga grew up in a small, lower class family in Amegakure which consisted of his father, mother, and older brother, Yue. His father was a construction worker, his mother was a stay at home mom, but his brother was the most well known in the family. He was the only one in the family who had ever attended the Shinobi Academy and was given the offer to join the ANBU ranks. He declined so he could stay with his family, but when money became scarce, he was forced to turn to illegal jobs. Yue was the most well known criminal in the Village, but he could never be prosecuted. In Shiro's eyes, his family was the greatest.

Early Years Arc (5-6 years old)
Spoiler:
Shiro and his family lived peacefully until Shiro turned 5 and a war broke out between Government and Civilians. The family tried to avoid going outside, but the war came to them. One day, the family was sitting around the house and were eating dinner. Then, members of the Amegakure Police Force knocked down the front door and killed Shiro's father and then turned to kill his mother. Yue came running down the stairs and killed all the police officers and turned back to Shiro. He crouched down in front of him whispered;

“I'll come back for you”

Shiro was in complete shock from everything that had happened. He didn't even have the time to ask his brother a question before he left the house and went running throughout the village streets. Shiro waited a few seconds before bursting into tears and falling over his dead parents corpse. He was so afraid of what would happen to him if his brother didn't return to him and let that ponder his mind for the remainder of the War.

Aftermath/Academy Arc (6-7 years old)
Spoiler:
A year passed and the War was over. Numerous ANBU members and Medics were sent throughout the village to help those that were injured. When they arrived at Shiro's house they couldn't believe what they saw, two rotten corpses and a bloodstained, 6 year old child. Among these ANBU members was an old friend of Shiro's older brother named Damiyo Hyuuga. Damiyo ran up to Shiro and picked him up because he hadn't seen him in such a long time. When everyone left, Damiyo took Shiro back to his home so he could rest peacefully. When Shiro awoke the next morning, Damiyo had made breakfast for the both of them. Shiro had no idea that Damiyo was going to help him head in the right direction of becoming a Shinobi. After eating breakfast, Damiyo took Shiro to the Amegakure Shinobi Academy for his first day of school. It was well known that Shiro was the youngest of the Shinobis in training, but with Damiyo's approval he got in.

Genin Arc (7 years old)
Spoiler:
A year passed before Shiro came home to Damiyo and told him he graduated from the Academy. It pleased Damiyo to see that a 7 year old Shinobi had passed to be a Genin. Shiro and Damiyo couldn't converse too long because Shiro had to meet with his new Sensei later on that day, so Shiro said his good bye to Damiyo and left. Damiyo had to go somewhere as well, on another mission at the edge of Amegakure's border. His mission wasn't even a real mission, he was given a note that just told him to be out there, and so he left the house as well.

When Shiro arrived to meet his Sensei, he didn't see anyone except for a girl and a boy who was in his Academy classes. The group of kids conversed before a man wearing the standard Jounin attire appeared. He seemed to be a nice person right of the back, but he then began their training. He started them off in Taijutsu, which Shiro was much more better than average in and caught the eye of the teacher. He then began training them in Ninjutsu, but that was another strong point of Shiro's which caught the teacher's eye once more. Before they began their small training in Genjutsu, another man appeared holding a piece of paper. He whispered into their Sensei's ear and his once happy eyes, turned into some emotionless ones. Shiro kept calm while the other students tried to listen in, but when the conversation was done, their Sensei stared at Shiro.

“Damiyo has died”

Shiro's eyes began to fill with water to the point some tears came down his face. He couldn't believe what was happening to him again. Another of his loved ones...dead. Shiro was in so much anger that he stormed off the training area for his Team and went to his house. When he got there, he was stopped by an elderly man wearing a pair of thick glasses. Shiro told him to move, but he told Shiro to come with him. In anger, Shiro struck out to hit the man, but the elderly man caught his punch and began to walk, holding Shiro's hand.

After 5 minutes or so, Shiro gave up struggling and walked alongside the man. They then kept walking until they came across a somewhat older looking building in which they entered. Upon entering, no one was inside but it was well furnished. The old man kept walking until he came across a room in which he entered. Shiro followed him hesitantly and saw that inside the room was only a table with 2 chairs on opposite sides. The old man sat down on one end and Shiro sat on the other. The old man pulled out a long scroll and began to read;

“This is the will of Damiyo Hyuuga....I leave my worldly possessions to Shiro....”

The old man kept reading the will, stating that anything that Shiro doesn't want will be given away to charity. The will was upsetting to Shiro and he began to get up to leave, but then the man read;

“...and if Shiro doesn't enjoy these things....I have arranged for him to receive my Byakugan eyes if he wishes to have them.”

Those words stopped Shiro in his tracks, he couldn't believe what he was hearing. He could have Damiyo's Byakugan eyes if he pleased. He would be the sole possessor of the Byakugan eyes in Amegakure, which would give him an edge in battle with his opponents. A single tear ran down Shiro's face as he thought about the offer that was given to him. The old man waited patiently before Shiro nodded his head to accept the eyes. The old man smirked and said;

“The transferring of the Byakugan will be held in two weeks. Be there on time”

Shiro nodded his head and went home to rest.

Attaining/Training Byakugan Arc (7-11 years old)
Spoiler:
The two weeks passed and Shiro was ready to get the Byakugan as his own. He walked through the village streets to the Hospital where it would be done. Upon entering he told the nurse he was there for the transferring process and she pointed him down the hallway. Shiro turned and walked down the hallway for what seemed like forever until he reached a door marked with an “X”. He slowly opened the door and saw 3 men wearing white lab coats who motioned him to come in and sit on the operation table. When Shiro entered and sat down on the table, he was bound by chains to lay down. The next thing Shiro knew was that a scalpel was plunged underneath his eye and it was “scooped out”. It was unrealistic pain he was experiencing he thought as blood gushed out of the socket and onto his face. The scientist returned holding one of Damiyo's Byakugan eyes and placed it back into Shiro's eye socket. He was still experiencing pain as the eye made its way to reconnect with everything that was cut while removing the previous eye. Then the next thing Shiro knew, his other eye was undergoing the same pain as it was being “scooped” out and replaced by the Byakugan eye. When the transferring process was done, Shiro was drained of energy from the operation and fell asleep.

When Shiro awoke, he couldn't see because his face was wrapped with bandages, but did see a series of dots, that he would later learn to be, some Chakra Point System. The outline got closer and closer to him before slowly removing the bandages from his face. When the bandages were removed, Shiro could see that it was the Amekage. The Amekage had a nice sized smile on his face when he saw the faint outline of the Byakugan eyes in Shiro's. It was a successful operation, but the Amekage needed for Shiro to master his new power. He then told Shiro he was going on a trip to Konoha to train with the Hyuuga Clan to master his newfound abilities. Shiro agreed and was sent out on a trip to leave the village with the accompaniment of 3 ANBU members.

The trip was long and hard, but Shiro and the ANBU managed to get there. Once reaching the Konoha Entrance Gates, Shiro was passed off to members of the Konoha's ANBU. To Shiro, Konoha was too bright and dry for his own taste and everyone was friendly in a way. It was the exact opposite of what Amegakure was like. It took about 5 minutes until Shiro came across the Hyuuga Clan's Territory and then he was passed off to Hyuuga members for safe keeping. He was in the area for no more than 10 minutes before a man appeared before him. The man would be latter known to be Mao, and Shiro's next Sensei. Mao was the best when it came to training others to master their Byakugan and had even trained their current Clan Leader how to use his own. Shiro stood before the man with an emotionless expression on his face as Mao stared him down. Mao then snapped his fingers and a boy (around Shiro's age) walked towards him. Mao then stated that if Shiro wanted proper training then he would have to win in a spar with his star pupil. Shiro accepted and later that day, a spar was held.

At first, it seemed as if the boy would be a quick match since Shiro was trained to specialize in killing or seriously injuring someone for something he wants. When Mao yelled “Go”, Shiro ran at the boy and when in striking distance, punched him. The boy swiftly dodged the punch and shut down a chakra point in his arm. Shiro then tried to ball his hand into a fist, but he simply couldn't do it. The boy gave a smile as he then aimed to shut down the chakra point in his shoulder. When the boy hit him, Shiro rolled backwards and stood back up to his feet. He took out a kunai and threw it at the boy, but the boy blocked it with one hand. Shiro then took out a handful of kunais and threw them. The boy rapidly spun and deflected the kunais. This began to upset Shiro because if he went in close with the intention to hit him, then he would lose chakra points, but if he threw weapons, they would be deflected. Shiro shut his eyes and then he saw it again, Chakra Point Systems to everyone around him. He kept his eyes closed and focused in on his opponent. He could see the boy's chakra system clearly and this was how he was winning so far in the battle. Shiro then began to run at the boy and saw the boy channel chakra to his hands. Shiro did the same and as the boy raised his arm to puncture one of his chakra points, Shiro deflected the hit and hit the boy in his shoulder. He then spun on his foot and hit him in the other shoulder. He had shut down 2 chakra points in the boy's body and caused him to stumble backwards onto the ground. Shiro couldn't believe he had did it. Not only did he make the boy fall back, but he had won. Or so he thought. A girl ran through the crowd to the injured boy's side and helped him to his feet. They then took on a battle stance and used one of the Byakugan's most feared techniques, Eight Trigrams, 64 Palm Strikes. The technique happened so swiftly that not only did it catch Shiro off guard, but it also shut down all of his Chakra Points and left him on the ground unable to move. Mao then yelled “Done”. The boy and the girl walked off and Mao slowly made his way over to the very injured Shiro.

“Why did you do it Shiro?”

“I didn't feel like beating him to a pulp in front of you”

“Well everyone here noticed how much chakra you had stored up in your body...and just for that reason....you choosing to get the Byakugan was probably the best decision you could have made”

“Thanks so when do we start training this thing so I can go back home?”

“In the morning...should I have someone help you back to your room?”

“Nope because if I stay here...I can't be late for training”

Even though Shiro's face was in the ground, he knew that statement would make Mao smile. The next day, Shiro was feeling a lot better and was ready to train. For some reason, Mao decided to train Shiro with his other two students, the boy and girl from the previous day. Shiro later found out that they boy and girl were twins and that was why they managed to defeat him the previous day. Mao then directed everyone to begin Taijutsu training, followed by Chakra Control, followed by Strategical Training, and followed by a spar between Shiro, the boy, and the girl. That was the schedule for 4 years and when it was done, Shiro was a near master of Taijutsu and a master Byakugan user.

(More to come once he gets older)


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Re: Shiro Yagama (Never Mind...Not Finished)

Post by YonYon on Tue Apr 21, 2009 9:07 am

You start as a genin.
And as a Genin you only get All 6 E-Ranks, 2 D-Ranks and 1 C-Rank Jutsu. And lower your age. a 20 year old genin seems highly unlikely ^^

And welcome to the site.

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Re: Shiro Yagama (Never Mind...Not Finished)

Post by Shiro on Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:31 am

Well all of it didn't fit onto one post so here's the rest:

Nindo: "I do whatever I want....when I want....and no one can stop me"

Rp Sample: (Finished)

Spoiler:
Shiro slowly walked through the forest in the outskirts of the Rain Village. He was given the mission to patrol the border of the Village and stay lookout for potential enemies and enemy threats with his fellow teamates due to the shortage of Chuunin and Jounin in the Village. They had each decided to spilt up and go their seperate ways to cover more area. Shiro had decided to patrol the outter most area and as he did so, he looked up at the cloudy sky above him and knew that it was going to begin raining soon. He sighed heavily pondering on the power he wished he could gain and how he could gain it. He made his way to a heavily dense forest area before hearing the snapping of a branch above him. He knew that it could possibly be an enemy and with that in mind he clenched 3 kunais from his pocket and slung them in the air above to hear 2 make contact with the tree and the last one clashing with a small piece of metal. He thought to himself that he found someone and the thought was confirmed when 4 shinobis surrounded him on the ground. For a moment there was silence, but it was cut short when one of the Shinobis stepped forward and Shiro quickly took out 5 kunais and threw them at the Shinobi pinning him in the neck and dragging him several feet into a nearby tree. The other Shinobis looked at thier friend momentarily seeing how much power was in the throw and how much blood the man was losing. In this small amount of time given, Shiro thought about radioing in to his teamates, but abandoned the thought after thinking. He knew that they would probably get in his way. Then he heard,

"Get him"

The other Shinobis then hastily moved at Shiro and he just stood there as 2 of the remaining Shinobis came at him. He punched one in the face while bringing his leg up to kick the other one in the chest sending him skidding backwards. The last Shinobi then began to perform a series of handsigns but Shiro only smirked.

"Too slow", he whispered softly.

He had his Water Clone appear from a tree above the enemy and shoved kunai into his skull. The other Shinobi that was kicked calmly looked at Shiro while also staring at his fellow teammates who each had seemed to take either a lot of damage or was dead. He took a step backwards, but Shiro had already began one of his Ninjutsu techniques; Rikujou Douyou no jutsu (Ground shaking technique) making the last Shinobi stumble backwards and land on his back. Shiro then began to run at the man as quick as he could and kicked him into the air to use the technique known as; Lotus. He then simultaniously hit and kicked the man and finished by delievering a powerful leg kick to the top of his head making him crash into the ground below. When Shiro landed beside him, he saw that the man was still alive, and could still move as well. He removed 2 kunais and shoved them both into the man's lungs. Shiro had wished not to kill the man but instead have him die slowly and on his own. He slowly bent down over the man who was laying on the ground below and looked him in his face.

"I sometimes feel sorry for those that have the nerve to mess with me and my Village. Today I really do feel sorry for you and I will let you stay here for as long as you like. Yell if you like as well, but I am the only one patrolling these parts for the next 48 hours so I might see you again before the blood in your lungs fill, which will kill you."

He then stood while retrieving his two kunais and wiping them clean. He smirked revealing a few of his demon like fangs before walking off into the distance hearing the Shinobi give out a few coughs that were supposed to sound like yells. A few more yards away from the enemy Shinobi and there was nothing, but quietness which meant the enemy was either dead or waiting for his time to run out. Any way, Shiro looked up into the skies that began to pour its tears onto the earth below. He then let out a sigh before hearing his radio go off. He answered it and said;

"Nothing is going on around here, but I'll keep looking"

Jutsus: (For now I'm done)

Taijutsu Techniques
Spoiler:
Konoha Shōfū (Leaf Rising Wind)(D)
Omote Renge (Front Lotus)(C)

Ninjutsu Techniques
Spoiler:
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu)(E)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)(E)
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)(E)

Genjutsu Techniques
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None as of right now
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Re: Shiro Yagama (Never Mind...Not Finished)

Post by .:Arashi:. on Tue Apr 28, 2009 3:02 pm

Sorry I didn't check this earlier but I didn't know you edited since you didn't post you did ( you see how I made it kinda your fault in that comment Razz Yes it's the power of a staff member XP) Well then here are things you need to edit.

First. put your jutsu in the proper template.

Second. Implants of the sharingan Byakugan etc. isn't allowed here.(I dont think amegakure would know the details on the seal on the head of Hyuuga members.)

Third. You wouldn't have a genin arc since you will start as a genin meeting his team for the first time.

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