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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:44 pm

name:narutah
age:14
gender:male
village:leaf village
appearance:red and black hat red and black skates have a gold line on them as well he weres a black and red hoodie with gold that says narutah
personality:is fun to be around and likes to make jokes with friends but is ready to figh when needed
rank:AS
clan:hyuge
history:narutah is a world traveler going to anime worlds he cares a sword called blazeing shadow it looks like a straight line but goes up and its flamin narutah grew up in a poor houshold with him and his dad untile narutah and his dad moved in with his new mom narutah was outside alot with his friends and girlfriend they like to have battles and play ninja narutah would see if his dad was going to come with him everyday but he just stayed with his mom narutah likes to swim,train,and learn more justsus he definatly liked to talk to his girl narutah was like the most popular one in the village with boys and girls boys just like to fight him his dream is to become the hokage like his dad his fear is to be the worst ninja in the village
nindo:to protect the people he cares about
likes:ramen,girls,justus,and girls
dislikes:vegtables,mean people,and homework
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Sun Oct 19, 2008 3:58 pm

approved.

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PostSubject: Narutah's updates ( finished)   Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:11 am

Fireball
Character Use: Jiraiya
Rank: C
element:fire
skill:ninjustu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack


description:Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.


Great Fireball Technique
Character Use: Uchiha Sasuke, Yamashiro Aoba, Uchiha Fugaku, Uchiha Obito, Uchiha Itachi, Hatake Kakashi
Rank: C
element:fire
skill:ninjustu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack


dscritpion:Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon jutsu such as this are seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for Uchiha clan members. Once the member can manipulate fire, they are finally recognized as no longer being a child.




Name:rotation
Character Use: Hyuuga Clan
Rank: c
element:none
skill:keeki genkai
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Defense
Note: Special Bloodline Technique


description:Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack.

If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.


name:Leaf Great Light Rotation
rank:d
range:close
amount of stress:none
skill:taijustu
description:Konoha Dai Senkou is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Maito Gai. After charging his opponent, Gai will unleash a powerful kick which will spin his opponent away.



Name: 8 traigrams 64
Character Use: Hyuuga Clan
Rank:b
element:none
skill:kekkai genkai
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Note: Special Bloodline Technique


descritpion:Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forceably closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their op






name:lions barrage
Rank: C
range:close
amount of stress:none
skill:taijustu
description: is a Taijutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke after he used his Sharingan to copy the movements of fellow Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Sasuke first uses the Konoha Kage Buyou to manuever his opponent in a vulnerable aerial position. While shadowing his opponent, Sasuke will attempt to strike them from a vulnerable angle. If he is unable to make a clean strike, he will strike anyway as a feint, to draw his target's attention and defense to one area. He can then strike the undefended area and begin knocking them downwards towards the ground. As the enemy falls back to the earth, Sasuke will deftly rotate his body around to deliver a full force kick to their chest.




name:leaf great whirlwind
rank:c
range:close ,mid
amount of stress:none
skill:taijustu
descritpion:
Konoha Dai Senpuu is a Taijutsu technique utilized by the Leaf ninja Rock Lee. Like the normal Senpuu, Lee uses his quickness and agility to deliver a series powerful spinning kicks to his opponent.


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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:17 am

Use the Proper Format for the Justu. Describe both Jutsu more. And I denying Element Dragon. No A rank Jutsu or being the Only one to use it

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"Thats him...Minato Hit- Wait....Is he Smiling?".
"Neither Killing nor dieing Frightens me....I AM YOUR EXECUTIONER". - Minato Hitomi
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 7:55 am

Still denying that Element Dragon Jutsu

NO RASENGAN IT IS AN A RANK ONLY.
SUMMONING JUTSU ISNT WORDED CORRECTLY.
USE OFFICIAL JUTSU DESCRIPTIONS
SHADOW CLONE IS A B RANK ONLY
ROTATION IS C RANK
8 TRIGRAMS IS B RANK

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"Thats him...Minato Hit- Wait....Is he Smiling?".
"Neither Killing nor dieing Frightens me....I AM YOUR EXECUTIONER". - Minato Hitomi
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 8:18 am

so what to change rotatoin and8 tragrams ismy clans justu
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:10 am

Ya can keep rotation, but 8 trigrams, remove the summons of you want that. If ya want to keep the summons. CHange their rank to B and remove Trigrams and Kage Bunshin. Your only allowed 2 B ranks. and you still arent using the correct descriptions

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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:26 am

And get rid of the Elemental Dragon Jutsu.. Chuunin get no A-Ranks... NO RASENGAN... YOU MUST TRAIN FOR IT.. PERIOD
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:34 am

done
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:15 am

Name: fire dragon justu
Rank:E-A
Element:fire
Skill:ninjustu
Range: depends on the abilitys of the user
Description: you put your hands together and focus your chakra into a dragon it changes into a fire dragon changes depends on your chakra if it touches something it explouds

Name: lighting dragon justu
Rank:E-A
Element:lighting
Skill:ninjustu
Range: depends on the abilitys of the user
Description: you put your hands together and focus your chakra into a dragon it changes into a lighting dragon depends on your chakra if it touches something it explouds


Okay.. THOSE SAY A... CHUUNIN CANNOT HAVE A RANKED STUFF... AND YOU CAN ONLY HAVE 2 B RANKED JUTSU


Name:summoning justu(riaku)
Rank:c
Element:none
Skill:ninjustu
Range:all
Description: for naruth to summon riaku he putsthe blazing shadow in the ground then do some hand sighns and says summoning justu the blade glows bright with the flames on it then smok and their riaku


Name:riaku transformation justu
Rank:c
Element:none
Skill:ninjustu
Range:all
Description: riaku has the ability to turn into 3 beast

1.
2.
3. they can shoot fire and lighting justus out their mouths exept number 3 the uses his hands




#3 can uses the gentel fist are and rotaions and also 8 trigrams it can also see aura and uses it in attacks
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USE THE SUMMONING TEMPLATE.. AND DESCRIBE THEM MORE

Name:rotation
Rank:c
Element: kekkei genkai (hyuuga)
Skill:ninjusut
Range:close
Description: a hyuuga clanmember has the ability to focus their chakra and create a bll of chakra around them like a sheild




Name: 8 traigrams
Rank:b
Element: kekkei genkai (hyuuga)
Skill:tyjustu
Range:close
Description: a hyuuga clan member has the ability to see and hit every chakra point in a person also they can seal off chakra of a person

GO TO ANY NARUTO INFORMATION WEBSITE AND GET THESE JUTSU'S DESCRIPTION....


Name:shadow clone justu
Rank:b
Element:none
Skill:ninjustu
Range:all
Description: its a solid clone of the user and islike the user in every way when it is attacked it turns into smoke

THIS CAN ONLY BE USED BY JOUNIN..
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:32 am

Name: fire dragon justu
Rank:E-A
Element:fire
Skill:ninjustu
Range: depends on the abilitys of the user
Description: you put your hands together and focus your chakra into a dragon it changes into a fire dragon changes depends on your chakra if it touches something it explouds

Name: lighting dragon justu
Rank:E-A
Element:lighting
Skill:ninjustu
Range: depends on the abilitys of the user
Description: you put your hands together and focus your chakra into a dragon it changes into a lighting dragon depends on your chakra if it touches something it explouds

Please put a definite rank for these^.

Also try to give a better description of your jutsus. If you can't then i suggest you go to www.leafninja.com There you will find a whole bunch of cannon jutsus and even the Hyuga jutsus that are described properly.

Also please choose a different summoning contract since someone else have wolves already XD

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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:14 pm

done
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:49 pm

FOR THE LAST TIME...YOU CANT HAVE WOLVES AND USE SOMETHING UNIQUE......LAST....CHANCE

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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Wed Dec 24, 2008 3:33 pm

its a foxxxxx
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Thu Dec 25, 2008 12:14 am

Name: fire dragon justu
Rank:c
Element:fire
Skill:ninjustu
Range: depends on the abilitys of the user
Description: you put your hands together and focus your chakra into a dragon it changes into a fire dragon changes depends on your chakra if it touches something it explouds

Name: lighting dragon justu
Rank:c
Element:lighting
Skill:ninjustu
Range: depends on the abilitys of the user
Description: you put your hands together and focus your chakra into a dragon it changes into a lighting dragon depends on your chakra if it touches something it explouds

1 Element.. AND DESCRIBE THIS BETTER!
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Thu Dec 25, 2008 2:09 am

Still denying the summons

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"Thats him...Minato Hit- Wait....Is he Smiling?".
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Thu Dec 25, 2008 8:27 am

changed
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Thu Dec 25, 2008 9:52 am

Alright Narutah I'm gonna try to help you out. So please do as I say xD

1. First of all Please follow the jutsu template. In other words put your jutsus in the right format, that this site requires you to do. Jutsu templates can be found in the Jutsu creation section xD.

2. Please ensure that all of your jutsus have a rank on them.

3. Also please read the summoning rules and follow the template. Below you will find the summoning template.

name:
rank:
species:
looks:
origin:how did you come across this summon
type:

After you've done these thing I will take another look at your app XD.

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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Thu Dec 25, 2008 10:55 am

done pluto
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Thu Dec 25, 2008 11:38 am

Your Jutsus seem ok but your summon is still a problem. For one if you had read the summoning rules then you would understand.

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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Fri Dec 26, 2008 3:05 pm

done fro real
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Sat Dec 27, 2008 7:17 pm

Use the Taijutsu Format for the Tajutsu moves... And

Name: fire dragon justu
Rank:c
Element:fire
Skill:ninjustu
Range: depends on the abilitys of the user
Description: you put your hands together and focus your chakra into a dragon it changes into a fire dragon changes depends on your chakra if it touches something it explouds

Describe it better... and a Definate Range please.

No Taijutsu puts no stress on the body.. Change that.. AND DESCRIBE THE FIRE DRAGON JUTSU BETTER PLEASE!
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:31 pm

done
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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:37 am

Narutah you've got 10 jutsus and I believe the amount is 7 for your update. So please remove at least 3 of those and remove your fire dragon jutsu. It's really troublesome and at the rate your going you won't get it approved. However I will help you out in the Rp to develop it if you want.

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PostSubject: Re: Narutah   Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:42 am

alright
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