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 Interactive Story :Book One "Children of Creedos" Prolouge

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PostSubject: Interactive Story :Book One "Children of Creedos" Prolouge   Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:16 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Interactive Story :Book One "Children of Creedos" Prolouge   Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:17 pm

Prologue part 1

The year is 1152. In desperate times the previous king Noxus took 100 children from there families and home in hopes that he could create the perfect solider. The last one standing was to be the General and lead the Creedos Empire to Victory over the opposing nation but instead of making one perfect solider he had made 5. The Families could do nothing to save there children but to accept 300 pounds of pure Creedos Gold and to hope that there young boys would survive.

The Children were put through training not even a grown man could survive but many did out of the Hundred Children of Creedos only 23 survived the training. From then the 23 children went to the Battlefield and fought 50 armed soldiers many were killed but in the end 9 children survived by killing 50 men and those 9 children became Warriors of Creedos. This was the name the King gave the children during his speech when he said

“You are the future of Creedos in your hands lies the fate of our great Empire. Today you are no longer children you are men you are Warriors of Creedos! I am proud to be in your presence in the presence of real Men .Out of the nine of you only one can truly become the Warlord but be proud that you made it this far tomorrow is the last trial”

The last trial was pure slaughter the children were given weapons and they had to fight … each other in the coliseum for the enjoyment of others! The battle was long and hard the spectators loved it .Friends had to kill each other in clod blood what better entertainment .The battle was put in Creedian History forever as The Battle of Senka Chi .9 boys fought and killed there friends . 5 boys lost there innocence and 4 boys lost there lives .5 survived they fought beyond sundown when the spectators left. But the boys stayed fighting, fighting for there lives!

“Die” said the one called Cree as he swung his axe at the one called Zen almost decapitating him .Zen was a tall blonde boy about 6’1 with looks that could make any Creedian girl droll ,Zen was also a mute he never spoke. Zen blocked with his round shield and then lunged at Cree with his short sword trying to hit his stomach .Cree blocked with his other axe then raised his axe and swung it downward,” Zen you fool prepare to die!” Cree was about 5’9 and loved to fight he had no remorse when he killed his comrades this made him one of the most hated and one of the most feared. Zen tried to block the axe by pushing back with his short sword this planned failed. Cree was to strong and pushed down Zen’s blade pushing it closer and closer to his face cutting him this would leave a large scar if not kill him .Cree grinded his teeth like a barbarian that was about to kill his latest victim, his eyes were like that of a beast fuelled with hatred and bloodlust .If it where not for Koi Zen’s older brother Zen would be dead . “Get off him!” Koi rushed Cree tumbling him over .Cree was knocked off he tried to get up but Koi was already on top of him punching him relentlessly with brace knuckles .Cree tried to stop him but Koi just kept going .Zen was getting up watching his brother beat the boy that tried to kill him .Koi was 6’1 as well he had long black hair and was the passionate type that would give his life for people he loved .

While Koi was beating Cree, Hira was fighting Shin .Hira and Shin were fighting each other with blades Hira used trench knives and Shin used sai’s . They were equally matched but they were getting tired it was only a matter of time before one slipped up and let him self open for a critical hit .Hira was 5’7 and had red hair that reached his back .Hira was funny type that liked to make jokes but on that day he didn’t even make one joke. Shin had black hair it was spiky and reached his shoulders he was 6’0 in height. Shin was almost as quiet as Zen even though he could speak perfectly well. Shin was a genius that could out smart any man but he rarely used his intelligence. ”Hira you are slowing done I might kill you please try to keep up” said Shin after the long silence.” I wouldn’t be talking Shin you aren’t exactly the fasted kid here “Hira said he then went for a sweeping kick. Shin jumped dodging it he then went for an upper-cut “Hiya” said Shin. Hira blocked with his trench knife they pushed there weapons hard not letting up. Because of the pressure from the two blades they created sparks of small sparks of fire

The fight lasted a very long time each person not giving the other person a chance .The fought long into the night until they could not fight anymore that’s when the king came and selected Cree as his champion . The boys no longer cared who would be the Champion they only cared about surviving and returning home to there families. The only one who cared was Cree. If they returned they could never hug there mother the same way .They could no longer work with there fathers .They could no longer have a relationship with a girl. They could no longer be them selves the innocent child was gone and something dark and strange took its place.

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PostSubject: Re: Interactive Story :Book One "Children of Creedos" Prolouge   Thu Nov 13, 2008 2:30 pm

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